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lyrical1
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e526BXxYsG4

Old song, one fo the first i did, (2007)

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the quality is ass but you have some nice lyrical content. i would work on tightening up your flow though, it was off a little bit on a few parts, almost seemed rushed. the beat sounded pretty cool too. obviously this was pretty old so im only going off of that. keep doin ya thing man.
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no doubt the quality was garbage, and yeah my flow was kinda what ever on the beat at that time. I recorded it straight through damn near after recording the hook, so it can see how it sounded kinda rush.

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