The Abyss

[Lyrical Gen]

I wish I had the beat but this is the beat I was writing to.
Instrumental- The song "Old World Disorder" with Skam and Eminem
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YasO5-hnIkU

Hook-
Tell me the name of the MC that you think should get the belt…
If it ain’t mine’s than I suggest that you keep it to yourself…
The God MC shedding hope in the bleakness of this hell…
Even Satan was a believer until he fell!!!...

The universal perverted rapper, I’m known to smack ya…
Til ya head is turning backwards like a demon converted Catholic…
I lyrically murder rappers, cause beating me u got a better chance…
Not being turned to ashes, while tied to ya burning mattress…
I’m known to be savage, my methods of domination…
rival Satan in the CONCAVE DEPTHS, yet to arise to greatness…
CROWN me the apex of this conversation…
I’ll BRUSH the first letter off, so you can Rest on the CREST of a Connotation!!!…
So when you leave the Crescendo….descend slow…
Or fall quicker than ion concentrations in trauma patients…
Boning women in a flying spaceship, I’m brutal with G…
Get (D)uped (A)nd (D)ecieved, for thinking ‘Yo Momma’ made it…
I’m savage when dumping these crude rhymes, and I’ma have…
You jumping in due time, Criss Crossing you fools' minds…
Like two lines held together, with nucleotides in loose bonds…
Slash ya…piece you together, and then stab ya another two times…

Hook-

A demon from a different world, I spit it in monst-‘er’-rous detail…
Real men won’t hit a girl, well I’ll trip and stomp on a female…
Kick the life out of each cell then ‘leave’ a ‘leaf’ trail…
For the cops to follow until they stop on a smoldering pile of Lee nails…
One looked up in a tree and yelled, as I jumped down…
And choked him like Spreewell, with a ghoulish grin that could freeze hell…
like Satan couldn’t ‘stand for me’ and I beat him until his ‘knees swelled’…
and turned the thermostat down to at least twelve degrees Cel-…
See us/sius….I mean see me, two different souls in a body…
One’ll court a chick, one’ll grab a ho in the lobby…
This cat is no Liberace, baggin hos with my savage flows…
Tho in comparison his mouth is close to a potty probly…
Never gave f*ck and never will because his clever skill…
Got you gathering interest like a credit bill…and I bet you will…
Understand why I’m speaking brutal, I’ll shove a migraine…
from my brain, mash it into a tablet then feed it to ya…

Hook-

[Alvin]

Damn man you have some skill. Some of my favorite lines:

"Even Satan was a believer until he fell!!!"
"I’ll BRUSH the first letter off, so you can Rest on the CREST of a Connotation!!!…"
"Get (D)uped (A)nd (D)ecieved, for thinking ‘Yo Momma’ made it…"
^^^Nice effin play!
"Never gave f*ck and never will because his clever skill…
Got you gathering interest like a credit bill…and I bet you will…"


Its a hot piece man, id be here all day spilling how much dope shits in there, nice drop.

[QwarterZ]

damn man....you came with it on this piece a lot of slick flips here and there..the hook was pretty smooth...I was feeling it man...I cant say much about it...it was straight lyrical...good job

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[Lyrical Gen]

Thanx for the feedback ya'll, it's duly appreciated.

-- Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:01 pm --

Uppin...