EMINEM REMIX(when im GONE)

[Slicka]

jus a lil joint i flipped to last night need feed

[Deciple]

You flow it well on the track, The hook went well.. kinda fell off a couple times but nuttin major... it was mixed well.. i was thinking about doing a remix to this track.. Delivery, Presences, Energy, all good on this track, keep it up

[Slicka]

thanks fam appreciate it

[blokB]

RAW. I lie it better than the original because i feel you have a more creative idea. but em is has a mainstream persona its hard to look past so im probably biast. i like your work dawg. thanx

[Lawgix]

didn't like the way you started the beginning... was rushed and sloppy... first verse... it was off and then back on... meaning you fell off a lot and lost the beat but found it and so on and so on... beats WAY too loud and compressed... i'd find a high quality version of the beat if you could... like 256Kb or 320Kb... hook was okay... second verse was like the first... hook was off on the second time around... third verse was okay... hook on the third was back on beat... the under dubs were a lil too loud... it was kinda all really muddy so that made the quality suck... next time i'd practice your verse before you record that way you know what to say at what point in the beat and have it down pat... your mixing and mastering could use work tho i really didn't hear a lot of mixing in this... sounded like you just recorded it saved it n went about your day... good shit tho lyrics were tight... deep as hell... keep workin on all that shit that is up top and u'll be good...

[K KiLLaH]

Yeah I like it but i feel lawgix... How can you put ya heart in ur work and dare release the sloppy copy version you n'aw what i mean if you took ur time with this errybody would luv it... anyways id appr return feed if you get a chance http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/bmf-2 ... 19769.html

[TheNobleOne]

flow was choppy in a few areas, i think it was the slow beat. the hook wasnt bad, could have been a little tighter, you stretched the word "budging" too much. you can try to enunciate a little better on some bars, kind of hard to tell what your saying. second verse was way better then the first, shit was much tighter. you had some nice lyrics and i dig the concept man just work on tightening shit up a bit. keep doin ya thing, holla.