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It's on that somber tip

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oh yes please.mp3
peep it peoples and give me some constructive feedback please and thank you
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Re: It's on that somber tip

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Suggestions- either bring in a bit more bass or mix the current bass to have a bit more bass vibration to it.
Also, bring some change up in that drum sequence, it gets real repetitive.

The beat has potential, and the mixture of sounds ur using sound good together, but it almost just sounds like one bar repeated for three minutes with a couple pauses here and there. Diversify, and then this could be a solid beat.
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