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New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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Srry for the short drop, but finals have prevented me to do more, but in a week or so I will have some drops with more length to them. So, Thanks for Listening, Leave Feedback, and Enjoy!
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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Dude this beat is the sickest beat ever.. if you havent made a full track to this i want a verse on this haha.. the lyrics and flow and all was pretty good.. i liked the vibe this track gave.. I see this in like a movie.. haha good stuff bro
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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lol the beat is sick man, I can send it your way if u want...
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Yeah send it my way.
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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where you even find beats like that? that's one of those joints you just get on and rip........like the flow fam lyrics was made tight 2........lemme know if you eva wanna collab.........good drop


like the gown line btw
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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Alright, I'm gonna honest with you, this is probably my least favorite of the tracks I've listened to of yours. I don't think you ride the beat too well compared to your other tracks, in all your others the beat and your lyrics and delivery all mesh together real well, but in this one it feels like two very distincly separate layers, the beat and the vocals. And I actually don't really like the beat in general too much myself, maybe my expectations were high after seeing the previous posts, but I wasn't feelin it much at all, found it to sound too poppy-punk blink 182 kinda shit, which is probably my least favorite kinda music. Don't mean to be discouraging, but just bein honest, this is the only track I've heard of yours that I've been disappointed in though.
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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First of all thnx for the feed and listen...Deciple check your Pm cuz Ive sent the Cd your way, Slicka def. down for a collab but it wont be for at least two weeks til I get these finals out the way....and Intrinsic that's fine man, its all preference, sometimes your just not feeling a certain style, which is coo. But def. keep listen to my stuff, because the style u do like is the one I put out most often so stick around....Again thnx for listening and keep looking out for my stuff
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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this was pretty cool... i like to hear America Hi-Fi be mixed into a beat... (that songs the shit by the way) this is one of those beats u find on those How To Be An Emcee instrumental mixtapes... sick shit tho... lyrics are cool... i liked it... extend the song out... n it'll sound good
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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I have to second what lawgix said man, make it longer! The flows nice man, calm, relaxed, like you aint in any hurry to smash my ears with non sense. I'm feeling it man.
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Re: New Song "You Don't Know" (Freeverse)

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The mix is good in them tracks, lacking a little energy thou. If you going for a laid back sound you need to have a little more finesse with your flow. But decent tracks thou, keep doin' your thang homie.
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