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songsfrmtheleft · Post by **songsfrmtheleft** » Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:22 am

This was produced by Vybez Beats. I love the production.

It's my first time trying to write a chorus, I still don't understand at all how to make them. If someone could help, it would be appreciated.

Deciple · Post by **Deciple** » Wed Nov 17, 2010 11:45 am

Imma be real with you, I wasnt diggin your flow, Your lyrics are to mainstream for my likings.. Pointless lyrics IMO, The hook was off beat the whole time... no emotions really, sounds like you reading from a page... This will probably make it tho.. Lil Wayne will listen to this and probably jump on it and it will become like #1 in the Nation...
But this is just constructive criticism, Hope you take my opinion and just run with it..

songsfrmtheleft · Post by **songsfrmtheleft** » Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:00 pm

I gotcha, thanks for the input.

Slicka · Post by **Slicka** » Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:49 pm

not diggin your flow at all fam........but you have room to grow most def
like the beat but think you need to reconstruct. keep droppin though

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