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Beamer Benz or Bentley

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Re: Beamer Benz or Bentley

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lol i like it had sum dope punches
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Re: Beamer Benz or Bentley

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i thought this was kind of gay
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Re: Beamer Benz or Bentley

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You hit the beat well wit the flow and i agree, some good puns too. Just kinda short.
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Re: Beamer Benz or Bentley

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Some Good Punches, But I Really Felt Like You Were Trying To Do That Lil Wayne Styled Shit, Ya Know?. And How You Started The Track Was Different, I Enjoyed That. Maybe It's Me, But The Overall Vocals Seem. . .Dry. . .As If They Need More Support From Other Vocals, Or At Least More Effects. It Kinda Seems Plain. Maybe Do Some Alternate Takes And Panning For That. Also Sounds Like A Mixtape Take. Quality Is Kinda On Edge, It's GOOD, But Sounds Like Something Cassidy Would Do, Where They Took His A Capella Vocals And Mixed Them With Some Random Track, And The Final Product Sounds Like His Vocals Are Way On Top Of The Beat? IDK If U Understand But Yeah. Energy Was So-So. Overall, Decent Drop. I Just Think If You Improve The Things Mentioned, You Would Have A Better Song.

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Re: Beamer Benz or Bentley

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yeah didnt really like this either... beat wasnt that good, lyrics kinda bland and boring.. i guess just not my taste...
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