Man Of Myth

[Colossus]

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They say he had three heads, with three eyes a piece
He had claws, a forked tongue, and steel knives as teeth
Upon the rhymes and beats, this beast would dine and feast
And every line he'd eat just fueled the fire he'd speak
In some minds a freak, but in most minds a myth
He'd roast hides to crisps and ground spines to bits
His saliva dripped from his jaws, a widening maw
Spit sick as the plague, fangs like a knife or a sword
By design he was God, but by fallacy he was evil
A modern day King Kong hanging from the steeple
He'd a took the form of people, but his feet were robust
His legs were tree trunks, and each tooth was a tusk
Running a muck, people watched he couldn't hide from it
His stare would turn cities to salt, he snorted lines of it
He was tireless, had an appetite for destruction
And no amount of chaos ever seemed to budge it

His stomach hungered for more, more blood and more gore
He gutted the poor victims and took their tongues with a sword
In the ocean, he bore a hole to the core, the heat he'd harness
He'd write his poems with dinosaur bones dipped in tar pits
Regardless of screams or cries he never hesitated
To grip a victim, and clench em, till bones disintegrated
He slowly made up his mind, to open heavens gates and to find
His sole creator, and rip his head from his spine
But on that day the God, sent thunderbolts to his flesh
Hadn't understood it'd only fuel the bolts in his neck
The volts were sent through his wirey veins
Across his chest, to his heart busy supplying his brain
Pumping the flames, churning the fire within his eyes
He spit lines of pure light and he lit the skies
He never died, he awaits to feast again
On the day I uncage this crazed beast with in

[aLb]

Wow... nice flow and word play. The opening was hot man.
"They say he had three heads, with three eyes a piece
He had claws, a forked tongue, and steel knives as teeth
Upon the rhymes and beats, this beast would dine and feast
And every line he'd eat just fueled the fire he'd speak"

The entire verse flowed on the topical story. Kept me interested throughout.

Diggin' that.

-wrote a song about it.. like to hear it here it go-

[Kau the Lion]

Flow was on point throughout. Some of the descriptions got a bit redundant, especially in the first verse, but they were full of intense imagery none the less. I felt like you could've spent more time on the story in general. Perhaps have spread the second verse out into two and gotten more detailed with the events that transpired.

My favorite bar was probably this:

In the ocean, he bore a hole to the core, the heat he'd harness
He'd write his poems with dinosaur bones dipped in tar pits

If you get a chance please return the feed:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/colle ... 18949.html

[Colossus]

Flow was on point throughout. Some of the descriptions got a bit redundant, especially in the first verse, but they were full of intense imagery none the less. I felt like you could've spent more time on the story in general. Perhaps have spread the second verse out into two and gotten more detailed with the events that transpired.

My favorite bar was probably this:

In the ocean, he bore a hole to the core, the heat he'd harness
He'd write his poems with dinosaur bones dipped in tar pits

If you get a chance please return the feed:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/colle ... 18949.html

Also my favorite bar haha. I'll return this tonight. Expect it.

[Slicka]

like the word play........could actually follow the flow.......nice multis........
good joint

[Kuhlerblynd]

I also liked that bar alot. This piece was tight man, and you laid down the imagery nicely. There was another section that stuck out to me...

Regardless of screams or cries he never hesitated
To grip a victim, and clench em, till bones disintegrated
He slowly made up his mind, to open heavens gates and to find
His sole creator, and rip his head from his spine
But on that day the God, sent thunderbolts to his flesh
Hadn't understood it'd only fuel the bolts in his neck

Just seemed to bring the end together nicely, and is really worded well. I appreciated reading this. One of the better pieces so far this month. Solid work fam.

[The Man]

I'm pretty sure I'm "The Man."