Still shootin

[songsfrmtheleft]

Man what? My life is like a swan dive into a swimming pool. It's kinda like a movie but you couldn't see me, even in film school.

Have an issue with me, what you gonna do/
No matter..imma play it cool

First you see me now you can't locate/
I'm standing on the highest point in first place

While roses are being thrown at my feet/
Look at me, spitting as if heaven gently weaps with me

Waterworks just going bezerk/
Trying my best to pick myself up, they know I'm hurt

Yet thet try to exploit me/
Unbreakable but they try to destroy me

Good luck young bucks/
Crossed my unit, I guess you just fucked

Wise up, there's no competition in this race for fame/
Cuz I treat like I'm obama and I'm running for change

I'm off the chain like I just let my flow off the chains/
I represent nothing, an amalgamation of different things

Don't worry about where I got from, fret where imma take it

And by the time I get to throne, I'm hoping that it's vacant/
If not imma take it

Game of death, aint no fakin/
Floors of enemies different type of hating

I'm at the top looking down and still ascending/
Getting better day by day, with every line that's writting

Soon people will say oh boy, is he nasty of course/
Did you not hear the shit, he treated the beat like meat of his main course

Original...turntabling late I'm a night owl/
My shot wet, and there's the foul

Easy as taking a free throw, there's no denial

My style...is leaning on the side of a melting pot of others/
New kind of fly, this one comes without feathers

It's more like an aero, gulfstream, G6 if your nasty rich...

I like being a mile high, so does your nasty bitch

Just ask me what I'm talking bout/
I'll show you a diagram of how wide she can open her mouth

Damn son, stronger than samson/
Handcuffed her looking for the ransom, then some

Government still shooting/ oil companies still poluting

And aint nobody asking what they doing?

It's ashame how the blame game, only has that name and no other consequence

Blonde girls aren't the only one oblvious to the obviousness

Open your eyes, girls open your mouth wide/
And watch as I turn your tongue into a slip n side

Consciously I'll admit I'm a jerk/
But when I drift to sleep my subconsciouse is even worse.

[QwarterZ]

For some reason I sat here cuz I thought it was you spitting on that beat
but it wasn't happening.....

that's foul...either way the beat is cool, the lyrics were meh
I didn't like them really, it seemed too elementary for my liking
maybe it woulda strung together decently if you didn't space the bars like you did
either way I felt a bar or two on here was nice, just should get re-worded
and bulked up...I won't tell you which ones though...for not letting me know IF YOU SPIT ON THE BEAT BEFOREHAND

[songsfrmtheleft]

Sorry about that man. I'll warn you if I'm not on it the track next time. I'll see what I can do about beefing the lines up.
I'm not really a punch line person, but it's definitely something I should work on. I'm about to write one to a Kanye instro and see if I can do what you're talking about.