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New Song "Fresh On Da Scene" Check It Out!

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Thanks For Listening, Leave Comments, Enjoy!





Last edited by Livenlearn on Sun Oct 31, 2010 3:06 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Dude im digging this... Your flow, delivery, presences, mixing, it all is good man.. im not to fond of the hook that much... but you got it going on the verses.... i have listen to this a couple times.. the beat is way sick man.. you could do alot to this beat.. you executed well... Good drop homie
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U got a real dope track here man. The delivery is mellow, matching up well with the atmosphere the beat creates. The mixing on the vocals could use some work, the first verse has a little bit of a 'tin' feel to it that I think could be improved. The hook also feels too tin-y to me, and just in general I'm just not feeling the hook much. But the verses all lyrically ill, and got a real smooth feel about em. And the beat is killer, the kind of beat I'd wanna rock. Overall, I'm diggin' this and hope to hear more from you in the future...
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Thanks for listening first and foremost, and thanks for the positive feedback...as far as mixing goes I've since re-mixed the vocals so hopefully they sound better if not, then I need instruction or better equipment, and I wouldn't mind both. Def. lookout for some more of my stuff as I should be dropping another track this weekend if I find some time to record. But again thnx for the responses they only help me get better.
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Yo...LiveNLearn...this is that shit my nigga! haha You got that lyrical "Kill Bill", ya feel me!?! Solid punches, steady flow, good pronunciation, excellent choice in production...this is a dope track, handsdown. You've definitely got sumthin worth pushin, good demo material.

Most def lookin forward to hearing more from you here on illest.

Overall: 10/10 (it's been a long time since I've given someone a 10 lol)
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Eh, Kurse thnx for the feed and listen man. I'm def. tryna get better, very surprised by the 10/10 rating but I glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully I can stay on that level and keep putting out good music. Again, thnx for the listen, and keep looking out for my dropz.
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