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Emphamiss Eyecis
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THA RECKON'ING,

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BEAR WITNESS* TO A BITCH WIT MORE PULL THAN A DENTIST*
SERVE'N THESE CATS WIT A VENGENCE* OF WICKEDNESS*
TAKE HENCE TO THE FEMALE EMENANCE* A BIRTH SENTENCED*
A MORTAL REMNENCE TO * THIS LYRICAL MENACE*****
ENGAGE IN A SORCERESS SLAIN'D WORDPLAY*
STAGE'D 2 ENRAGE* THE 26 ALPHA'S IT DEPRAVED*
ASTRAY* RECLAIM THE SHADOWING OF SHADE*
SO HEAT'D IV DEPLEATED, THE EVERGLADES
A CARNIVORE OF BEAT MACHINES* SPLIT'N IN2 HYPNOTIC MELODY'S*
AWAKE"N CONDUCTIVE POSITIVITY* OF HIPHOP'S ENERGY*
HARMONIZ'N THRU ENOMOLIES*FILTERING CHAOTIC MONOTANY*
THE EMPHAMISS APPROCH 2 THESE CONCRETE RHAPSODY'S*

THIS SUBTLE DOSE ALONE* LEAVE FREQUENCY'S UNKNOWN*
BLOODRED TWO TONED* DISMANTLED MICRAPHONE'S*
DESICRATE THE HOMES* OF THIS EMINENT ZONE*
BANKQIUSH THE OBSOLITE THRU THE SPLIT'N OF OMH'Z*

WRITTEN WORD'S ONCE LAID RAISE UP OFF THE PAGE*
INSLAVED BY THE DEPTH OFA RYHME'N GRENADE*
SO SETTLED IT ENGRAVES WHATS ALLREADY CONCAVED*
SEDUCE'N THIS VERSE TO JUS FADE IN2 ITS GRAVE*...
A HAUNTED RENDER'N* AWAINT'N LIKE INK 2 A PEN
ASSULTED LYRICAL MAYEM* BLISTER LIPS WITHA GRIN*
THE TACTICAL RESINS OF A FEMIN'N HENCHMEN,
FEROCIUS BARS JOIN THE BEGIN'N VERSE'S 2 COMPLIMENT THE END,
WELCOME 2 THE PLACE WHERE BONES BREAK................ IN THE RECKON'N.
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EMPHAMISS EYECIS,THA GODDESS OF RAWNESS..
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Dana Riot
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Re: THA RECKON'ING,

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This was good chick, I had no problem whatsoever keeping with the flow. Vocab was on fire, and lines like "A CARNIVORE OF BEAT MACHINES* SPLIT'N IN2 HYPNOTIC MELODY'S*" and "FEROCIUS BARS JOIN THE BEGIN'N VERSE'S 2 COMPLIMENT THE END" stood out the most to me. Good shit, keep dropping it's nice seeing another femcee doing her thing here. :)
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Re: THA RECKON'ING,

Post by Phasewon »

This shit was on point, you was wildin' on the vocab, flow was nice and the shit was well structured, can't really hate on anything, nice joint. Hit a muhfucka back with some feed if you get a minute- http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/satan ... 18927.html
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