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Lyrical warfare.

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Flowz like sharks attackin,sharp and graphic,
dark assassin, with the darts and acid,
target practice, with blindfolds,walking backwards,
raw and classic, punch a man with glasses, in the jaw for laughing,
squeez ya damn throat, have you cough and gaspin,
hope you got ya ,halls and asprin,
My horror tactics, haunted house,walls is crashin,
pALms is graspin,big guns with large attachments,
Haul ya ass in, to the mourge and longest casket,
kill every new oponent strong or faster, Flow monster enfested,highly respected
Needle enjected,sickly ,enfected,
Rappers I messed wit, i already dycected,
Rhyme skill built like tetris,except when,
I swallow other niggas for breakfast,
Gangsta guess list, invite ex'es, i slept with,
Killin niggas is obsesive, they run i catch them,
A Lyrical legend, snatchin off his necklace,
Sharp like knifes ,edges, cut there skin till the flesh Hit,
choking from neck slits, Grantin a deathwish,
Gun collection, shoot em till there bodies breathless,
No exceptions, knifes leave em headless,
Take what im left with, put em in the trunk of the lexus,
Wont regret this, nice reflection,
Followin my lifes direction, 
this shit like a movie like Netflix, 
Dump em in the river let em sink like dead fish...

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Post by pablo1212 »

This is a solid piece ... you multis are great and your wordplay is good ... sometimes I felt puzzled due to your flow , but maybe it was by the way I was reading it. Anyways , keep dropping bro ... pablo~

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Thanks bro and yea it prolly was the way u read...but good looks on the feed..stay up...one.

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Post by Lyrically_Gifted »

ayee this is hot im diggin dis yoo keep it up
"Ayo my lyrical game is insane/my mouth speaks my brain/ i use different slang my technic is strangeeee/im a vet you a rook btta stay in yo range,before i let the bullet hit yu/split yu/watch yo back bkuz ill dismiss yu/i see through yu hataz jus like a crystal,ill hurt yu niqqaz dont wana see me inside the verbal,wordplay bkuz im original/descpicable/niqqaz dont like me bkuz im betta than tha niqqa they LISTEN TO"


AYEE YU HEADS GET AT ME
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Post by Phasewon »

This joint was flexin' the multie work effectively, started off solid as fuck with the multies and rhymescheme, started to babble on towards the middle/end but the flow stayed on point nonetheless, ill shit, stay at it.
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Good looks on the feed...its well appreciated..havent been on for a min...but im cummin bakk...stay up..1.

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Post by Orfadox »

Dude You Just Keep Getting Better And Better With Ya Drops....Multi's Were Nice Wordplay Was Nice...Very Nice Peice Overall
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Multies were on point doe.. Flow was on point.. Punches weren't really there doe.. It was str8 good shit
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like everyone else said...the multi's were flames brah
I liked it, did your thing nicely, and kept the flow from the beginning
very nice work.....keep writing
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Thanks for feed brosephs lol...well needed..stay up and keep ritin..1

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Post by Slicka »

multis were crazy....like the wordplay......dont really do the textin shit doe so it was hard for me to follow ya flow. nice drop
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Thanks mann good looks on the feed..

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Oh it's lyrical warfare .... !?!

Well i'm the eagle who dares
to fly straight into lairs
where armed forces get scared

i'm that ... true school warrior
who'll penetrate your cornea ...
hear this ... cos I'm warning ya .... !!!!

It's time for you to listen ....

lyricism terrorism ...
is simply what i'm bringing
with incisions on your vision
from inscriptions of precision
I'll take you and your division
to a mission filled with friction ....
your prescription of conscription's ...
gonna be your last addition ...
cos ... when I've finished dissin'
you'll have no pot to piss in ...

I'll hit ya like a
wall street crash
strip you down
of all ya cash

then like that
jus like the flash
I'm gone and back
with more attacks

leave ya ... so your ....
people see you
like kneivel
broke & feeble

then i'll break ya ...
and castrate ya ...
leave ya time
to meet ya maker

words you rhyme
prove you're a faker

See ....
I'm the .... Premier ... manager
lyrical damager ....
don't you know bro .... whoooaaa ....
you just another rap amateur

you rhyme anorexic
like .... Terri Hatcher ....
step back son
before my wordplay slaps ya ...

cos yes ... I'm the one
that Keanu couldn't batter

Mr Smith couldn't fix
your obvious glitch
a lyricist ...
whose lyrics miss ....
every .... target ...

Huh ... this to me
is just internet chit
but trust in this ....

when I ... drop lyrics
it's the dopest fix
you'll ever hit

beyond your ... usual ...
little prick ..... !!!

I'm the warrior who ...
battles for kicks
but don't be fooled

I come prepared ....
Believe .... hell yeah

for ..... "Lyrical Warfare !!!!!"

Peace y'all

Just needs a dope chorus now I think .... Suggestions people ???

Took a while but there's a little dose
of .....

The .... Big Virge .... style !

Peace y'all

Check more of me out here

http://www.bigvirge.com

I'm gone.
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Re: Lyrical warfare.

Post by The Man »

Don't know what the Big Virgin was trying to say, but this was good, compared to your other drops I wonder if you stole this.
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Re: Lyrical warfare.

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Watch out for "lyrical warfare 2: Rap Ops".....had to make a new account...idk y...but yeaa ill b droppin it soon...


And nahh my dude dats not my steez... i kno wat im capable of..dont need to steel nothing from anyone..im original.

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