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[Lol_Munteskue]

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[Markb]

It's ok, but I found that the flow doesn't really ride through out I think you need to take less breaks
use multis because It came across very basic, but at least it was in time with the beat
I'm not saying it's bad but not saying it's great either, I think your voice is decent but u need to deliver
stronger lyrics with some meta4s and add some sharp concepts to spice it up, otherwise it's just like
listening to a singer and not an emcee

props though, I listened to the end so I can at least say that

~Markb~

[STUD_PHaMOUS]

Lol, this was a crazy little jawn, but it was ok though. coulda stepped yo bars up just a tad bit

[LogiK]

Hehe, I'm feeling this.