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- IntrinsicCadence
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Unique little beat with some diverse aspects. Just finished it recently, let me know what u think...


- TheNobleOne
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Re: Realms
shit was alright man i mean better then i could do. beat wasnt that bad just not my steez. i also think you need to add a transition in there to seperate the verses from the hook in the beat. but keep doin ya thing.
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Re: Realms
eh yea i kinda agree, it was def creative and it had like a positive vibe to it but idk if thats something i could get on, but dope none the lessTheNobleOne wrote:shit was alright man i mean better then i could do. beat wasnt that bad just not my steez. i also think you need to add a transition in there to seperate the verses from the hook in the beat. but keep doin ya thing.

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Re: Realms
eh not really feeling it lil too busy and random especially the vocals, some of the samples go offkey as well imo it'd sound better with just the drums bass & the main sample loop
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[Killa Sin]

Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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