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IntrinsicCadence
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Unique little beat with some diverse aspects. Just finished it recently, let me know what u think...
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shit was alright man i mean better then i could do. beat wasnt that bad just not my steez. i also think you need to add a transition in there to seperate the verses from the hook in the beat. but keep doin ya thing.
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TheNobleOne wrote:shit was alright man i mean better then i could do. beat wasnt that bad just not my steez. i also think you need to add a transition in there to seperate the verses from the hook in the beat. but keep doin ya thing.
eh yea i kinda agree, it was def creative and it had like a positive vibe to it but idk if thats something i could get on, but dope none the less
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eh not really feeling it lil too busy and random especially the vocals, some of the samples go offkey as well imo it'd sound better with just the drums bass & the main sample loop
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