Flowin Commotion

[Audible Thought]

im live and direct from the belly of the beast
plannin attacks with these raps clearin out the streets
yo admit it you wack, when you spit on these beats
i make you weak in the knees better step and retreat
i am, the boss causin genocide ev-e-ry week
steadily speak the knowledge like an army of geeks
y'all are shallow like a reef im deep like a sea
read in between the lines and you'll find what i mean
undesigned like a dream keep grinding for cream
hittin my prime like 3 nobody liver than me
i take you higher than e, thc and ghb
combined, my lines are the highest quality
spit record setting heat like the waves in russia
i aim to rupture puncture and crush ya
a bunch of fakers imitators in my way
so i turn into the terminator and play with fate
go against the grain exterminatin the page
cuz my pen is full of lava im determined to gain
any sort of fame so y'all remember the name
its audible thought, the motha fuckin grill to your flame

[talent401]

Well da flow of the verse was pretty good and conistent..delivery was dere....pretty nice drop if u ask me...i just think the ending was a bit cliché...wit thw whole "remember the name"...ive heard that many times but overall nice..keep writin and stay up...

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[TheNobleOne]

pretty tight little verse man, nothing special but the flow was nice and it was consistent throughout. im diggin your pieces just try to expand and incorporate wordplay and different things in there to spice it up a bit. keep doin ya thing man.

[pablo1212]

this drop was decent for what it was ... cant really complain about anythin , plus the flow was on point most of the times ... but like talento sed , the ending was weak compared to the whole verse ... but keep droppin man .... - Pablo

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