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-TraMaTiK-
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juz made this lil while ago

Post by -TraMaTiK- »

if i told ya my head aint achin,id be fakin
but these problems juz keep escalatin
tryna deal wit fate-n-,hopin i can awaken
from the nightmare my lifestyle iz creatin
debatin, if wanna be a star or deeply captivatin
after a while i finally came 2 a conclusion
i juz gotta be me, without any illusion
but im so eager 2 be a leader
and influence these kids ta put down
them heaters, ur brain hungry?i'll feed urs
wit street smarts that stretch beyond all meters
but i can explode and write and show how tight
my flow iz when i fight ta express my heart
ova drums that ignite the same every night
but u dunno how tense this is
tryna express my life in rhymes and sentences
the suspense iz extensive
hopin i can give back god
what he put under my ribs..

i no da structure iz wack but i juz made it lil while ago....uppin 4 feed
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its good
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its was great , it was a bit short though.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

ye...i had more but i thought it wuz wack so i scratched it u no..but thanx..uppin
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Post by Lawgix »

that was pretty good man. i liked it cause u didn't talk about what guns u fuckin own, or, killin somebody over crack, or startin shit with somebody and shootin em in the head, i hate that fake shit. but yeah it was pretty real. big ups. peace

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