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[Lawgix]

post ur audios in here...

[Loon E Lou]

haha. i was like ok heres another fuckin drake beat. good switch up. the mic actually aint tooooooo bad. the lyrics are eh. you got protools? if so ya shit should sound nutn like this. but anyway, the beat is growin on me. add auto tune so young money fans rock to it. haha. really i think all you need is sum good filters for your quality. your emotions went in an out. i only felt the lines you put the emphasis in. its like your unsure of the verse at times. dawg you need that emotion in it. it sounds kinda like you readin me sumtn. all in all though, from what ive heard from you, this is really good. you stuck to the topic for the most part, which alotta cats cant do too well. mmm.....what else..........um. yea dawg i liked it though. its jus hard gettin past the not-so-great quality. in time though. holla at me if you need sum help on ya editing and mixin dawg. i can help ya step your shit up a couple levels jus by makin your vocals clearer. iunno tho. jus offerin. im done now. good shit catch. that lil lady in your pic dont look too bad either. i hope you handelin that.

[FlipSide]

LMAO At Loone... Its Descent Nice Beat BTW.... I Really Like That Beat LOL... U Write Descent Bro Its The Delivery U need To Work On... Its Different To Hear Ur Self on The Mic Then Jus Freestyling... A Lot Comes Thru When U Get A Better Mic As Well....And Good Headphones... Try To Make Full Use Of The Beat..Tho Its Madd Slow And I Had To Strecth Out My Flow And Slow My Self Down To This Beat... So Its Not That Ez... But With Practice U Wouldve Dropped A Lot More Fluid... Just Spit Ur Verse A Million Times..Then Record It Till U Feel Confident About it....Just An Idea... Good Writing Too... The Pieces Are There Dude.. U Just Got To Put The Work In....1

[Sentus]

I thought your delivery was good the quality just held the track back. Everything else was nice though.

[AbZ The Beast]

i can feel it man delivery was fairly solid
had some dope lines weaved within there
nickelback line was funny

other than problems u already know about, this was solid.

what type of mic u using?

AbZ