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Re: Ugly Duckling

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It's Good To See YOU Writing Again Catch22, Don't Leave Man You Have Talent.

Plus I Can See You've Gotten Craftier While You Were Away. Here's What I Like Most From Your Drop.
One sin up on a dime, a girl changed my life
She was a doll, earnin my love, but then it came at a price
We used to talk on the phone on my way to stayin the night
The closest time i ever came to meet an angel in life...
But as my boy shakespeare said, what made us friends
Can come around and prove to be the same fate to end
And opposites attract, we were so complacent then
I hope the love is joy enough to bring the faith again
Absolutely Dope, & Here's Another One
Outdated with rhetoric, started hangin with the lettermens
Started datin a friend and no I can't explain my my sentiment
No way to put and end to this- gettin faded to reminisce
I needed change so everyday I'm weighing out my tentative
Options, girl walked in and placated the lemon twist,
Every bad thought I had vacated the premises
Beast! Your A Better Writer Unlike Other People I Know
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Re: Ugly Duckling

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I Was Going To Quote But Id just Quote The piece As A Whole... This Was Well Written... Flow Was Great Thruout For The Most Part... Nice Topic And Nice Views On The Issue...Love Is An Endless Issue With A Million Ways To Adress It In Ways That People Just Dont Get Tired of... But U Made it Def Worth The Read... Oh And Its Nice To C People Putting They Actual Pics on Avys... Upss 22
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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