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lol This was pretty tough yo, The First Half was Def more potent then the last half.. other then That this Was a Solid Drop. lol u had some dope rhymes in there, good creativity.. and use of ya elements.



praised the heart over mind like Bonaventure
taking parts to build the image of God like Kepler
doctored doctrines and self-eulogies
orchestrated compositions and spells musically

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Hey Man Nice Drop Duke.. Had Me Going Fa A Minute. Creativity Like Mentioned ^^ Was On Point, Would Like To Hear More From You Man.
some called him Son of Themis who gave fire to Man
others thought of great Moses who acquired the Land
the Church argued its view of God by the sound of it
but reality gathered evidence and countered it.
who could it be? let me drop a couple clues
but if you already spot the truth then props to you:
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