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~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Wed Sep 27, 2006 3:44 am

Im Slittin ya Wrist, call you a faggot, then call you a bitch
i come from the hardest part of the metropolis
use a glock to spit, nah, i don't play, i murder on the daily-day
I was born in the bay, lived by the bay, I was raised as crazed
enraged with rages, blades were sacred, I played with razors
not like the emo chicks, I also played with grenades and bombs
made a song when I was young and said I'd lay them on the white house lawn
I was young and foolish, too young to do this, dumb and stupid
now I run this movement, something that none of you will ever do kid
drank lighter fluid, i've always been a strange man, ranging
from hanoous acts of violence to famous raps, that explains this wrath of silence
in fact a tyrant, a lyrical, miracle, spiritual force, in course with the fact
that I'm sporting a million dollar jacket like Clint Eastwood, I think hood
but live wealthy, you can't help me from myself I'm selfish, unhealthy
and about to be out of this bitch like wifey, so fuck you all, bite me

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Wed Sep 27, 2006 3:57 pm

is this site dead, or do you need to be known to get some feed back?

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:44 pm

lol yer i feal tah same waii with me vs jusick FEEDBACK PEOPLE yea man it wasnt bad keep at it!

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Thu Sep 28, 2006 12:36 am

it was pretty good...specially for someone jst showin up n dropping a bunch of verses...some of the stuff u wrote reminds me of alotta da shit i used to write about back in da day....i give this a 8/10 keep it up...i see lots of potential

n lately people havent been doin much of shit at all on here...jst give it some time tho...even i baerly get ne feedback on my shit...lol

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Sep 28, 2006 2:32 am

Much Appreciated on all the FeedBack!
Thanx Yall!!!

~GHOST~

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Sep 28, 2006 7:44 am

Yah this was straight. I liked the flow.
The scheme was pretty intricate.
And compound. Maybe a few to many
syllables in some spots. Vocabulary was
nice. Overall this was pretty cool. And
I want to see more.

Sorry I've had huge problems recently. Or you'd at least have my feedback on all your drops.

UPpin This For Some Elaborate feedback.

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Thu Sep 28, 2006 7:53 am

This was pretty pretty good for a keystyle , if it really was a keystyle that is.

Invincible · Post by **Invincible** » Thu Sep 28, 2006 11:37 am

It was alright man.I just feel you need to work on topics or along the lines of a theme. Other than that it wasn't bad keep up the work and keep enhancing.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Sep 28, 2006 12:00 pm

thanx for the feedback yall!

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 10:33 pm

i havn't been reading much of the verses dropped in writtens but i decided to randomly pick one i havn't read.. so i read this.. and it was pretty good.. 8/10

precise · Post by **precise** » Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:31 pm

yea same here, i dont go in written section much

but yea im feelin this verse, nice rhymes, few nice punches there, like the "ali" one and christopher reeves line

i know whatcha mean about lack of feedback, usually i get like, one comment from complexity and thats it lol

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