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off of the upcoming mixtape "No Feelingz"
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Just BICause
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Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
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Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
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Re: Just BICause
I Dig It.. Just Wish You Let ME Know U Was Doin' A Track Like Dis, I Woulda Collabed On It Cuz I Got Sumthin Like Dis Too.
However This Shit Was on Point, Vocals Extremely Tight!!
Love The Adlibs & Emotion Of The Track
Dope Joel Keep Droppin' Venom
However This Shit Was on Point, Vocals Extremely Tight!!
Love The Adlibs & Emotion Of The Track
Dope Joel Keep Droppin' Venom
Last edited by NoVeL on Thu Jul 08, 2010 11:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Just BICause
this whole thing was ....SICK... u KILLED da beat... once again.. Ya rhymescheme is crazy with ya flow..
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: Just BICause
i think you coulda rode the beat better prolly cuz i listened jay drake n wayne on this beat before you but i def was diggin what u were saying the content is strong like usual from you
Re: Just BICause
word thanks for the feed my nig.
All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
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Re: Just BICause
All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
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Re: Just BICause
dope shit once again, can't say anything else really lol
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Re: Just BICause
yeah man i got this off ya facebook a couple days ago, the song is real dope, the lyrics really show your emotion, even if you did go with more of the Drake/Lil Wayne flow, you probably did a better job on this beat than they did, keep that shit comin, i'm looking forward to No Feelingz
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: Just BICause
Ok Ok Cuda Used Lyrics For Referncing, But I Still Got U. Rite Off THa Bat I'm Feelin This. Good, Catchy Flow. Crisp Quality, Multies And Secondary Rhymes Smooth. 2nd Verse Is Nice.
"Eye Of Tha Tiger And The Indians Pride". Nice Wit Tha Proximity Mines Flip Too. Overall, Solid Track. Good Shit
"Eye Of Tha Tiger And The Indians Pride". Nice Wit Tha Proximity Mines Flip Too. Overall, Solid Track. Good Shit
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Re: Just BICause
mutual.. how did i use lil wayne/drakes flow? is it because the beat made you think that cuz its off of drakes album or?
thanks for the feed anyway.
thanks for the feed anyway.
All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
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Re: Just BICause
nah you didnt use their flow exactly it just had more of an off beat feel to it, and it probably was down to me thinkin that anyway, it was a good point anyway cus this was a dope track
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Re: Just BICause
woord woord. thanks for coming back and clarifying ish.
bumping this people!
bumping this people!
All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
All Time Text Record
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Re: Just BICause
This was a real nice track man, loved your delivery, you sound nice on the mic. Flow was perfect too. Lyrics were pretty solid, liked on the internal rhymes.
And you might think this is weird but I've got emails promoting Joel Venom and I've never even heard you until now...
And you might think this is weird but I've got emails promoting Joel Venom and I've never even heard you until now...
Re: Just BICause
^really? thats crazy as shit lol. haha thanks for the feed tho.
All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)
All Time Text Record
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Re: Just BICause
Haha yeah it says...
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DOWNLOAD HERE : http://www.datpiff.com/Joel_Venom_Ruggid.m121241.html - http://www.illestlyrics.com/copyright/zqwqcjfnmtoq
FEATURES,NICK NEMESIS,LUPE FIASCO,ONEFIFTYONE,NICEY,BLAK SPYDA,DJ CORBETT,KRAZY LYRICAL
PRODUCED BY EVO FROM SHADYVILLE RECORDS,TOM DAVIDS,KAJMIR ROYALE AND MANY MORE!
SO COP UP NOW BEFORE THE FREE COPIES ARE GONE!
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