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Shame The Devil

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(V 1: Jobe)
First off ya dont KNOW ME, grudges I HOLD DEEP
Crawling quick watching the DOOR GET SHUT, watch this bitch nigga get BOARDED UP
This Gonzo fagg HE'S RIDING MY DICK, he often biting and RECITED MY SHIT
And FUCK Creative, why you TALKING FO? I hate you HAWKING WHOES
This a basic rap when Im SPITTING FACTS, fuck all them SHITTY RAPS, yall plan to GET ME BACK?
Quarterz go find SOMETHING TO DO, how bout blow your brains out cause you got NOTHING TO LOSE
I'm lyrically killin' them I got their SPIRITS SHATTERED, I know ya got my LYRICS TATTERED
RainMan bitch you dont RHYME RIGHT, motherfucker those are MY LINES
Nigga never knew I SPIT THIS COLD, peep the weakness now IT IS SEWED
Bitch nigga Gonzo you a WEAK WRITER, and you telling me to BRING FIRE??
I'm sick of you bitches CRY AND WEEP, readin this produce VIOLENT DREAMS
Before I got HEARD OUT, niggaz got me TURNT DOWN, you niggaz are BURNT OUT
Yall WACK EMCEES, want to CHALLENGE ME? Yall have no TALENTS, SEE
Fuck you niggaz TALKIN' RECKLESS, I'm makin sure ya suckers GOT THE MESSAGE

(V 2)
Ruckus momma is a whoe thats what I heard it MUST BE TRUE, cause the slut done FUCKED ME TOO
Catch dont you need a license to be THAT UGLY??
I see why ya ugly ASS MUGGED ME (Bitch ass)
Ya bitch said she like MY SONGS FOR FAVS, because it puts a SMILE ON HER FACE
Launch granades we EXPLODIN' BOMBS, now ya whole foundation of your HOME IS GONE
Gonzo I GAVE YA STYLE, but I HATE YA NOW, it's time to TAKE YA DOWN
He was hoping to see my HOPE IS GONE, ya wrong bitch I'm HOLDIN STRONG
They call Lyricalfuckinbeast butterfingers cause he like to drop the SOAP ON PURPOSE, and ya FLOWS ALL WORTHLESS
(Fagget ass nigga)
I go HOSTEL, when I MOB FOES
I find you niggaz and EMPTY CLIPS, take it yall can ENVY THIS, "Creative ayy, somebody SENT ME THIS"
And yall got me FILLED UP WITH RAGE, I'm more ILLER THAN AIDS, I'm more of a KILLER WITH AIM, pull the switch and SPILL OUT HIS BRAINS
Ya scared the way ya SENTENCE RUN IN, once you hear the MENACE COMIN'
Last edited by young_jobe on Fri Jul 02, 2010 4:33 am, edited 3 times in total.
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what was this man the rhyme scheme wasnt that great it didnt have any punchlines man if your gonna diss these guys do it properly
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Freestyle Diss

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yea dude...where the metaphores and wordplay at? i dont think this will earn any respect on the chat box jobe... i think u better write to get ur skillz up...and peep work out and learn something.. like mutual said... if u gonna diss someone do it right... :construction3
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Re: Shame The Devil

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it doesnt matter.. as long as im gettn da facts out (hence the title).. if they dnt like da truth, oh well.. this aint about da rap game no mo..

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Re: Shame The Devil

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Wtf

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