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"Knockout Queen" [STUD PHaMOUS]

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"Knockout Queen" [STUD PHaMOUS]

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One of my personal favorites!
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this was aight.... 2nd verse was the better of the two. u had some nice rhymes in there

good job

sample n beat were dope
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SLO0o0o0oO)ooOOo0)0oo0o)oW Down Your Slurring Ya Words Tryna Damage The Beat Gurl. Its DOPE But I Think Ya Runnin' Outta Breath Tryna Catch The Drum-Set. But Overall 7.5/10 It Was Great But Mos Def Not Ya Best
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Thank you guys, i appreciate it
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Post by FlipSide »

i think the second verse defenitly came thru for u... Tho it seems the first some lines were a lil forced.. tho i def feel the energy on this track.. i like the whole feel of it...again the quality of this track is also above level... and i was digging the hook as well
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Post by HKX »

Dis was aight it's not my fav 1 dat u have dropped I like how u took it back 2 an ol skoo beat tho. 2nd verse was better then da 1st in my opinion. I thought u sort of tried sumthin' different wit it which wat made it stood out. Dis a good drop not da best I've heard 4rm u tho girl... keep droppin'
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Thank you guys for tha love, i really appreciate it!, Rugged aim me - ladiihovito or almightii_studded on yahoo
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Post by K KiLLaH »

try to be more articulate what are lyrics if they are hard to hear
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Post by Dynamiq »

i just think your adlibs should have been more on point but i was still bopping to this i've gotta say you have skill. just need get the emotion up delivery is kind of there..but it kinda sounds like your forcing the delivery. other than that keep it up.
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