Hip Hop Forum

Verse 1 : Y_o

Verse 2 : K KiLLaH

Verse 3 : Yello aka BOB 385

so the sample sounds like you took the sample and used cool edit and just doubled it up, the little pause i just dont like, the 1st dude had good flow, good energy, he was good, i liked your verse, you had that laid back style, a little more energy would have made it a great verse, your vocals could be a little higher, 3rd guy had good energy he was good, over all i liked the track all except that little pause between the samples

I love the honest feed man and feel the exact same way props

vocals seem a lil bit low/not mixed well cause the beat drowns them out at points agree that the drops in the beat sound bad, it sounds awkward you could probably just take them out and it'd sound better, delivery could be better you rapped a lil too monotone/laid back for the track flow was pretty solid throughout lyrics were pretty dope delivery was just lacking, 3rd dude probably had the best verse but thats mainly cause his delivery was the cleanest lyrically it was fairly even 1st dude and you need to up your delivery a bit

The engineer and I are actually gonna have a sit down about this track thanx for the feed HJ