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What I Got To Say

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Verse 1 : Y_o

Verse 2 : K KiLLaH

Verse 3 : Yello aka BOB 385
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Re: What I Got To Say

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so the sample sounds like you took the sample and used cool edit and just doubled it up, the little pause i just dont like, the 1st dude had good flow, good energy, he was good, i liked your verse, you had that laid back style, a little more energy would have made it a great verse, your vocals could be a little higher, 3rd guy had good energy he was good, over all i liked the track all except that little pause between the samples
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I love the honest feed man and feel the exact same way props
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vocals seem a lil bit low/not mixed well cause the beat drowns them out at points agree that the drops in the beat sound bad, it sounds awkward you could probably just take them out and it'd sound better, delivery could be better you rapped a lil too monotone/laid back for the track flow was pretty solid throughout lyrics were pretty dope delivery was just lacking, 3rd dude probably had the best verse but thats mainly cause his delivery was the cleanest lyrically it was fairly even 1st dude and you need to up your delivery a bit
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Re: What I Got To Say

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The engineer and I are actually gonna have a sit down about this track thanx for the feed HJ
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