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Fallout[Produced By Evo]

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even if i'm the last man alive,holding passion inside
not a soul would follow notes,unless they havent replied
put the sadness aside,it's been along time coming
strong minds summon rain and well it's actually dry,
brothers are asking me why,sins are what they had left behind
then reach a grasp at the sky,to be told access denied
everything plays a part in life and that has made me stronger
average days i'd wander,look back at states of karma
and ponder,right while i warm up,light up the gandja
armored ready for war incase of siting the contra
it's really odd huh? i try to differ from normalcy
picture a normal me,thats not what i was formed to be
everydays a challenge cotton havoc like embroidery
but most importantly lets on how the hypes distorting me
cursing like sorcery,sweaty palms and testy thoughts
of how i will approach the crowd right after i press record
nightmares as a target,someone pacing in a car suspicious
shells slipping through the windshield like placing up a parking ticket

Hook:there's no time to sit back and try to ball now
and tho the stress may make it hard im going all out
completely lost how have i made it this far
bizarre but phsyically i feel like im a fall out



i wake with my sneaks off,lazy in bed cause my feet sore
from all walks of life,and the pavement made me bleed more
my attitude is fucked up,on medication for mood swings
incase i latch the hate,to equip a nigga with two wings
in a comfort zone,sitting beside a force that
i welcome home but still think it's prison behind a doormat
can't talk about my mindstate it's evident i've lost that
so now my space ghost,partner getting rid of zorak
of course rap,made me a man before my dad did
when asked about my background,i take it to the adlibs
support me? nah never it's cool
im used to being out cast related,clever in school
tho i didnt graduate,or do homework at any time
i was more interested in making songs i could spit as mine
reached the finish line,don't thank me when im kicking it
realities a whole,quite frankly i aint not digging it

on the road to heaven,racing faster than a silver shell
accurate distilling trails,that has been a will to sail
and where theres a will theres a way,vaster than a killer whale
life's a beach,the tides can get massive if your guilt prevails
after all the bickering,disaster caught me visioning
a path thats mauled and flickering,look past it all im witnessing
downfalls in a brink,with a crown on while i think
what caused negative sound to renown all in a blink
am i differed from the norm or waiting as time rushes
to get a leg up on what's scorn evading from my crutches
pressures adding to havoc,finishing fine touches
blemishing wise structures and blistering prized subjects
skin deep,grim reapers hawk eyeing on my soul
and i cant do shit but act like loss timings not exposed
frost bite it's getting cold,hell froze over remind satan
if i'm along for the ride,get at my agent
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

Post by Loon E Lou »

hahahaha. i like the way this shit starts off. ha. bacon and eggs. man........yea this shit gets u all amped. dude drops super ill bro. flow is legit foreal. this is sumtn too dope dawg. i almost o.d'd listenin to this. this my typa shit man. if theres a way to cop this man, id like to. it would fit perfectly in my playlist. production is perfect. every verse is full of energy dawg. i was bobbin my head wit a bitter beer face the whole track homie. haha. maaaaan. ill ill ill. real solid drop pimp. 10/10 all day bro
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

Post by K KiLLaH »

Flow on this shit was dope and the lyrics are great beats dope too,

Suggestions turn the beat down a lil, And come stronger on ur ins and outs if you sound like a monster with the delivery i think this track would be INSANE!!
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

Post by HKX »

Def a 10/10 on dis track dawg u went in on dis beat u practically murdered it on a whole different level. Da whole flow on it was krazy, jus like Loon E said I was bobbin' 2 dis actually played it twice so double bobbin' dawg. Ill drop homie it was nasty haha.
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

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^woooord thanks for the feed my dudes!

and if you need any feed toss your links up!
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

Post by - Mutual - »

this track is pretty dope haha is this on No Feelingz? either way the lyrics were nice had some good punchlines in there, real emotion to your tracks you do it so well, produced quite well it thought, but everyone has different opinions on how something should be mixed, keep that shit comin Venom
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

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thank you mutual your always peeping my new material and leaving feed..thats love.
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

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This was purdy dope man, purdy nice flow
real shit, keep dropping
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thx
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

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good looking out famo!
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

Post by Shady_08 »

damn man... tight one.. amazing lyrics... crazy flow, i didn't just listen to it.. i felt it 10/10

support me? nah never it's cool
im used to being out cast related,clever in school
tho i didnt graduate,or do homework at any time
i was more interested in making songs i could spit as mine
reached the finish line,don't thank me when im kicking it
realities a whole,quite frankly i aint not digging it
best part!!!

keep goin' can't wait for the next one!


where can i download this one? :D

peace!
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

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wuddup JV, its Flo Da Kryptonite from Aveemcees, what can i say what i haven't said before on ur drops, just straight craziness. got much respect for ya man, stay up!!
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nothing but raw skill and talent my dude... u killed it for real
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thanks for all the feedback my dudes! leave a link or something so i can return the favor on your drops!
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Re: Fallout[Produced By Evo]

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"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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