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Majik Touch Ft Hazard - Grave Of a Broken Heart

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Majik .. Then Hazard.

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Re: Majik Touch Ft Hazard - Grave Of a Broken Heart

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yea the shit starts off ill. good lil intro i like it. first dudes flow is real smooth. alotta meaning. haz ur flow comes like ur writtens dawg. shits real elaborate. i like the delivery. slow flow but sounds real ku. the project is a good subject an all. sumtn i aint touched yet. flows were worth hearing. production sounded clean. i heard it from my phone and it sounded good on there so...yea. maybe yall could of talked a lil shit durin the hooks or sumtn. i dunno. but all in all these was a good track. good one dawg
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quality is ill as hell... Majik has got a great flow... Hazard ur flow has gotten so much better man... real elaborate bruh... great flow u guys... beat was nice too... mixed really well... r u guys gonna put a mixtape together??? if so i'll download that shit for real... keep it up
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nice beat 4 real.... first dude got nasty flow n delivery... mad controlled with it with the deep lyrics...hot....the sample in the hook HOT!!! Hazard got dat gritty sound and the delivery carries nicely ... good vocab and consistency...and the quality is definitly off the meters.... over all hot drop...
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Post by complexity »

A few multis that I didn't like from Hazard, but some of them rhyme schemes were fire.

Good verses, and good flows.

The mixing seemed to be on point, what do I know though.
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mayne the quality on this dope as hell, along with the beat which was also very dope i loved it, both verses were written well, and i will be bumping this all over the place haha good shit Haz and Majik keep that shit comin guys
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Post by TreTru »

Hmm nice off the start..beats Nice ..

haha..deliv is hard..flo's on point lycs tight..

hook snug...sweet..

Your delivery's gettin way better..lyrics dope as usual..
flo's gottin a lil better....

all in all this song sounds sikk .. good shyt dawg real talk..1
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Re: Majik Touch Ft Hazard - Grave Of a Broken Heart

Post by HKX »

I liked Majik's verse better then Haz no offense homie but I felt like Majik put a lil more heart into his verse. Majik def got off on his verse so props 2 dat beat is ill of course. Haz maybe it's da way u wanted 2 sound but it's not bad I had 2 re hear it quality is good 2. Happy 2 see u guys coming with better quality cuz I got tired of listenin' 2 tracks dat sounded like ehh haha. I agree wit Loon E bout u guys talking a lil during the hooks but it's koo either way jus da way u wanted it 2 sound. Dope drop and good verses 4rm both of u guys keep dropping
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