Jack Da Rippa -vs- Absolute

[JDR]

7 Bars
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Due 24 Hours after Check in..

G/L

[Absolute]

This is my check and verse, I wont be on again tonight..

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First Ms.Rippa, I aint KATHY LEE so TAKE A SEAT, n DON’T SPEAK like silent AUCTIONS/
TALK SHIT, My math skills aint FLAWLESS… But how you 13-0.. with 2 LOSSES?//1

Crossed Abs like Rips was ARAYAN YO, box voices til ya LARYNX BLOW/
EXPERIENCE SHOWS, Jack COULDN’T FLOW if next to a ‘RIPPArian ZONE” //2

GOT BEEF? Well SOMETHIN STINKS.. Must be all that bullshit JACK LINKS!! Im not FINISHED!/
This win is a GIVEN, given the fact the REAL JACK the Rippa…only preyed on WOMEN//3

As a MATTER OF FACT, Hes the ADAM SANDLER OF RAP, All jokes, but can’t SERIOUSLY ACT/
Ya CAREER DISSAPPEAR in a FLASH! N Its clear he a FAG.. How all the kids be throwin they MARBLES AT JACK!!//4

This LITERARY HACK is LITERALLY WHACK, open his MOUTH and Ill jack Jacks Jacket Crown!/
AYE YALL Laugh Out Loud, I JUST FOUND the hill that Jack STUMBLED DOWN! //5

http://www.pridedepot.com/?p=1588

An OMNIVORE bout to eat this OMISH-WHORE, aint even RIPPA PUSSY they day you was BORN/
Do like ends of PORN, GET OFF!! You PERFORM??? Nigga just give me the ORDER FORM for my BODYBOARD!//6

http://jackdarippa.com/bodyboards/


Aint seven but fuck it, just match my 6, G/L to you mon frere..You dont understand a line don't vote!

[JDR]

Ha..Time to get worked

Look nigga...

You can't even see me yet when I speak / breath text that eats these vets, I only need 3 secs
So when I squeeze peeps necks, Abs gon be lookin' for ways to stop the leakage, like B.P. Execs

U can Believe these threats, a beast blessed, this bitch knows I run it
The shits so redundant, coz if I wanted to "Fuck wit Abs", i'd just drop my "dick on his stomach"

The fist explodes and plummets, Bet he hates that, he stays whack, while I make a mess of ya best played raps
Coz when it's time to choose sides, "Ab a lean' towards the middle" like a "Texas State map"

I'll press ya face back, decayed, smacked, cracks on ya ribs, I'm fast wit tha fist
I laugh at the bitch, coz I heard Absolute was quick to "pick arms", only if he had "Scabs on his wrist"

I hate to bag on a kidd, but I checked ya past on a tip, & it’s a shit scene for a brothas life
Ya spits mean nothin’s right, coz what nigga ya know claim he suck at Text after about “15 other sites”????
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/absolute-vt14665.html

Fuck an Absolute, I’d be glad to shoot, soon as I press the Pin, he gon stare at comas
And for credibility? I heard nigga see about as much of the streets as Mexicans in Arizona.

pshhh breezy

[Absolute]

um ok..all them things you mentioned were all name flips, name flips=personals where i come from. but nice drop Jack, 1-0 your way..

[JDR]

Thx 4 votin' brotha. 1-0. Upppin'

[deafshady]

waoh!! jack rippa kill absolute dam! that why he is 13-0 at the starts!!

jack got my vote!!

[Absolute]

Nigga you gonna have to break that shit down..we battle for constructive criticism, not just for votes. Also, jack id appreciate it if after all votes tallied if you'd analyze the battle like a voter, as Im gonna do the same. Ive never seen someone get their opponents feedback..food for thought. But deaf break that shit down or it aint counting.

[P.Picasso]

Jack Da Rippa
You can't even see me yet when I speak / breath text that eats these vets, I only need 3 secs
So when I squeeze peeps necks, Abs gon be lookin' for ways to stop the leakage, like B.P. Execs

hmm...punch wasn't working for me and the 3 secs you could of worked into the ab punch...so I was kind of thrown off with the b.p leakage punch and the multis weren't working for me either...2/5

U can Believe these threats, a beast blessed, this bitch knows I run it
The shits so redundant, coz if I wanted to "Fuck wit Abs", i'd just drop my "dick on his stomach"

Lame Bar...Overall Seemed Forced...0/5

The fist explodes and plummets, Bet he hates that, he stays whack, while I make a mess of ya best played raps
Coz when it's time to choose sides, "Ab a lean' towards the middle" like a "Texas State map"

Again not a good punch...the multies were ight not the greatest punch wasn't executed cuz your using one line to set up and execute them...1/5

I'll press ya face back, decayed, smacked, cracks on ya ribs, I'm fast wit tha fist
I laugh at the bitch, coz I heard Absolute was quick to "pick arms", only if he had "Scabs on his wrist"

Mettaphor...bleh not a good bar either...1/5

I hate to bag on a kidd, but I checked ya past on a tip, & it’s a shit scene for a brothas life
Ya spits mean nothin’s right, coz what nigga ya know claim he suck at Text after about “15 other sites”????
absolute-vt14665.html

Wack...0/5

Fuck an Absolute, I’d be glad to shoot, soon as I press the Pin, he gon stare at comas
And for credibility? I heard nigga see about as much of the streets as Mexicans in Arizona.

Horrible Closer...1/5

5/30



Absolute
First Ms.Rippa, I aint KATHY LEE so TAKE A SEAT, n DON’T SPEAK like silent AUCTIONS/
TALK SHIT, My math skills aint FLAWLESS… But how you 13-0.. with 2 LOSSES?//1

Open With A Personal...And He's Not Even Acknowledging He's 13-0 But It Says He's 15-2...Funny...2/5

Crossed Abs like Rips was ARAYAN YO, box voices til ya LARYNX BLOW/
EXPERIENCE SHOWS, Jack COULDN’T FLOW if next to a ‘RIPPArian ZONE” //2

Nice Bar But The Punch Threw It Off...2/5

GOT BEEF? Well SOMETHIN STINKS.. Must be all that bullshit JACK LINKS!! Im not FINISHED!/
This win is a GIVEN, given the fact the REAL JACK the Rippa…only preyed on WOMEN//3

Played 0/5

As a MATTER OF FACT, Hes the ADAM SANDLER OF RAP, All jokes, but can’t SERIOUSLY ACT/
Ya CAREER DISSAPPEAR in a FLASH! N Its clear he a FAG.. How all the kids be throwin they MARBLES AT JACK!!//4

bleh this is a lucky one cuz the multies until the punch so...the only point you had was taken 0/5

This LITERARY HACK is LITERALLY WHACK, open his MOUTH and Ill jack Jacks Jacket Crown!/
AYE YALL Laugh Out Loud, I JUST FOUND the hill that Jack STUMBLED DOWN! //5

http://www.pridedepot.com/?p=1588
Played But The Multies Helpped Alot 1/5

An OMNIVORE bout to eat this OMISH-WHORE, aint even RIPPA PUSSY they day you was BORN/
Do like ends of PORN, GET OFF!! You PERFORM??? Nigga just give me the ORDER FORM for my BODYBOARD!//6

Not A Strong Finish But The Multies Hit 1/5

6/30

V/Absolute

[JDR]

Fuck a lame ass nigga named Picasso. Callin' my shit whack, givin' the nigga a point for decent multies but not even noting any personal I spit. I know a punch fuels battles but if you aint got personals, it don't mean shit but another written piece that could be used randomly against anyone. Haha fuck even gettin' heated over some internet bullshit. That shits whack as hell. But on tha real Picasso...Don't even bother peepin' my shit even if you like me better than the next nigga cos you dumb as hell. I gets more complexed than a straight punchline but if we went toe to toe on punches, no niggas gonna see me. trust.

Uppin for some bullshit. Mu fuckas piss me off with feed and votin'. I aint neva bitched about either until now but at least stick to the cats.

[deafshady]

huh absloute.. u want breakdown so there it is...
Punches: Jack - ( his punches were more personal, more aggressive, Absolute had some decent punches but nothing was sharp enough.)
Flow: Both - (both are heavy with the rhyming.)
Multi's: Jack - (50% of his verse was multi's, Absolute had a lot too but every rhyme Jack made was a multi.)
Creativity: Jack - (Absolute was talking about Adam Sandler, Beef Jerky, n' marbles. Jack just stuck to the personals and jokes.)


Overall: Jack

i complete agree with rugged cos me n him just knowing what we see//

-- Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:15 pm --

this bar "I hate to bag on a kidd, but I checked ya past on a tip, & it’s a shit scene for a brothas life
Ya spits mean nothin’s right, coz what nigga ya know claim he suck at Text after about “15 other sites”????" lmao lmao lmao

jack got my vote

[JDR]

Thx 4 comin' back & layin' that down again. & I'm down to give you some feedback Absolute. It's all good on the net homie coz if anybody took this net shit seriously than they need to get on they grown man quick.

[Munteskue_lol]

I'll just break it down real quick

Punches: Absolute
Flow: Undecided
Multi's: Jack -
Creativity: Absolute
Personals- Jack

Vote- Jack*

*Just cause overall it came off stronger and more confident with more reason behind the attacks and multis that were perfectly clear and made sense in context

Now I don't want anyone trippin out on me or cussin me out, but I gotta say it wasn't the best battle in the world. I was pretty excited to read this at first, but it wasn't that great. It was decent though.

[Absolute]

Aight its goes your way..no biggie. And I feel you jack. But on some real shit i wasnt bitching, if that waas what u meant..i just wanted to know why the nigga voted as he did, and if it was an intelligent vote or some "his was easier to read n had bigger words".A l is an l..you learn more. I apreciate how hardly picasso judged.However, with either of us noteven gettin a 3/5 on somethin..Id be interested to see what you beleive is a 5/5. Because trust ive been with the best online..not that i could hang, but ive seen it. Ive even recruited one guy to take on 8 individuals for a site to site battle. Jack you good, but these niggas arent. Of course you gonna stand out here. I dunno any good active sites anymore. But its WAAAAAYYYYY higher competition elewhere. Ive looked at your last couple battle prior to this one...nobody stood a chance until I. and if they disagree they can battle me. I can do 6 bars all day. Ima hit you off with the verse, trying to stay un biased..

You can't even see me yet when I speak / breath text that eats these vets, I only need 3 secs
So when I squeeze peeps necks, Abs gon be lookin' for ways to stop the leakage, like B.P. Execs

I like the punch, i thought it was creative. But it threw me off, because it wasnt personal. Honestly, if you take the abs, this bar could be used for whoever. Filler bar. But a good filler bar. so not entirely bar.

U can Believe these threats, a beast blessed, this bitch knows I run it
The shits so redundant, coz if I wanted to "Fuck wit Abs", i'd just drop my "dick on his stomach"

I done heard alot of abs jokes. But im sure u heard alot of versions of what i said. but i liked the wordplay coulda been worded better, but your rhyme scheme didnt allow for it.

The fist explodes and plummets, Bet he hates that, he stays whack, while I make a mess of ya best played raps
Coz when it's time to choose sides, "Ab a lean' towards the middle" like a "Texas State map"

I thought the punch was mad creative. Type of punche lines i strive for. A new nameplay. Only way this coulda been better would be (again agreein with picasso) if u utulize both lines as a set-up-punchline combo. You got the punches, attitude and all that, you god. But that first line has to be more than just a pleasnt read until the punch. I am guilty of this as well.,, do as i say, not as i do

I'll press ya face back, decayed, smacked, cracks on ya ribs, I'm fast wit tha fist
I laugh at the bitch, coz I heard Absolute was quick to "pick arms", only if he had "Scabs on his wrist"

Again, this is a cypher bar. Try to refrain from puting these in your verse. eh decent wordplay but i wouldnt be ancy to recycle it if you know what i mean.

I hate to bag on a kidd, but I checked ya past on a tip, & it’s a shit scene for a brothas life
Ya spits mean nothin’s right, coz what nigga ya know claim he suck at Text after about “15 other sites”????
absolute-vt14665.html

Nice personal. You did your homework. way to pit your opponents words against them.

Fuck an Absolute, I’d be glad to shoot, soon as I press the Pin, he gon stare at comas
And for credibility? I heard nigga see about as much of the streets as Mexicans in Arizona.

Again, nice bar..but not personal. Always finish strong. YOur better than that.

Overall, I dunno if you didnt care or felt like you didnt need to try, but this verse felt half assed. It has its good parts as expected, but u didnt suprise. Honestly (completely unbiased) had it not been me n the battle n i voterd, i woula voted your opponent. I felt the verse lacked consistancy, and you didnt exceed expectations. It could be due to lack of a challenge. But IMO..honestly, from an educated hip hop head stand point, you didnt do enough to take the w. However, this is an opinion, and you walk away with the w regardless. but try harder next time. U only as good as you push yourself to be.

[NoVeL]

Absolute We Could Get It Poppin' If You Want, I Disagree With You On That Last Quote

nobody stood a chance until I. and if they disagree they can battle me.

There's Alot Of Potential Emcees On This Site Including Me!! I Could Also Back It Up In A Battle Or Audio You Choose..

[Munteskue_lol]

Word man. I don't know why you're comin off sayin that people aren't good on this site. I know a lot of people on this site alone that could beat you. I'm not saying you're bad, 'cause you're pretty good, but there's definitely nothing to be cocky about.