Lawgix,Flip,Messiah,Feniex,Plex Collab

[FlipSide]

An active member collab on Illest,

Topic: World views on the effects of negativity on socitey, its causes, effects and so forth. Without further due.....

Lawgix

poverty is honestly gettin a lil bit critical
cuz obviously the governments prophecys

are a bit cinical were in a pivitol stand point
where hungry helpless victims murder their own people

for cash plus we let these crazy ass killers loose
so they can rape our children who in the palm of

their hands hold the future... but you keep askin
who can change all of this shit well its you sir...


Flip

I walk like jesus with sandals ta face political scandals and hands hand u
frequent on channels the death of these mammals rasin no answers
A nation built with the hammers is in shambles cuz of what made em
No move to replace em..dreams chase em but negate when race comes
so i raise slums with raised guns and Bums with the drugs that made em
To replace chumps that hate us but plate us ta crate us in dollar makers
Our prison system got children missing what in life should be a given
a product of heaven trapped in a demon for the purpose of living

Messiah

I'm Infested With A Revival That They Protested For Their Survival
So Contested Became The Rivals We Left'em There To Die Fool
Such An Abhorrid Nature That We Had Conveyed To These People
To Save Them An Evil But Nothin We Hadn't Even Graced Them As Equals
Why The Hell Are We Better Than Any Third World Country
We Don't See Why We Should Help Because We're Not Hungry
But We Gave Them Rights It's Not There Fault There Murderers
Ignorant Shits Will You Use That Excuse The 5th Time They Murder Us

Complexity

I never held back my views, with that in mind, crazy me/
believing the government has at least one decent agency/
taught that was the way to be, I just relaxed with delight/
didn't know the passion of christ, actually happened in life/
we went to iraq in a fight, over the Saudis, hijacking a flight/
ya'll see an unlawful policy, while we are all job free in poverty/
the mob and gotti robed less than them frauds on wallstreet/
God and greed, its a volley between the evils of profit and prophecy/
Feniex

the tempers hit as all undiscovered splenders hit
the weather hit's damn and undercover agents spit
to the ground where lessers live but they never quit
the sight's a bitter twist on the eyes of censorship
each member get's a discount only cuz they never lived
went to war now they on the cornerstore in rememberance
it's a feather's whisk from territorial trips on December's blend
all on a count of trends from then corrupted, 1970's president

Catch 22

Corporation conglomerates monopolizing the revenue
I rep for victims of greed who see the lies and Catch 22's
I'm tellin you- ya sheltered by celebrity faces
Ya never see the homeless people lookin mentally vacant
Weathered and aged, but all you say is "it's irrelevant, ain't it?
Tell him to go get a job he's better endeavorin wages
A vicious cycle, quit the bible practice- this is a war
We gotta minimize the gap between the rich and the poor


Deafshady

trust me, this will be last you hear of me
lyrically, blessed with it like im spirtually
indearing, crash at night with no steering
no fearing, crying in shame with no tearing
i must be nearing, my final destination
conversations, laughs, its all im facing
heart is racing, mind wont stop pacing
lifes in my palms, grippin tight for the taking

[deafshady]

that props is fucking hot with my last verse going on there,,, damn

[Munteskue_lol]

what happened to my verse, wtf?

[complexity]

what happened to my verse, wtf?

Why do you say what the fuck. Why not just ask what happened to your verse?

lmao

[Munteskue_lol]

I don't know. It doesn't actually mean what the fuck, it's just kind of like a figure of speech or texting habit.

Why does anyone say anything?

[eMCee Havic]

feelin Flips and Fenix's shit the most, mutuals shit was iight not greatness, lawgix shit was very unelevated shit was below sea level, deafshady's allways elevating, good lil flow, dug the topic, could of been executed better but still overall it was dope

peace

[FlipSide]

my bad catch....i blame ur boy deaf.

[Borat]

Messiah
I'm Infested With A Revival That They Protested For Their Surviva So Contested Became The Rivals We Left'em There To Die Foo Such An Abhorrid Nature That We Had Conveyed To These People To Save Them An Evil But Nothin We Hadn't Even Graced Them As Equals Why The Hell Are We Better Than Any Third World Country We Don't See Why We Should Help Because We're Not Hungry But We Gave Them Rights It's Not There Fault There Murderers Ignorant Shits Will You Use That Excuse The 5th Time They Murder Us

I really like the flow in this verse. Everyone else held their own. Deff worth the read.

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[Lawgix]

feelin Flips and Fenix's shit the most, mutuals shit was iight not greatness, lawgix shit was very unelevated shit was below sea level, deafshady's allways elevating, good lil flow, dug the topic, could of been executed better but still overall it was dope

peace

always hatin on me damn... lol

[NoVeL]

poverty is honestly gettin a lil bit critical
cuz obviously the governments prophecys are a bit cynical

Good Multies On Lawgix's Behalf, I Enjoyed The Scenes In Wordplay

A nation built with the hammers is in shambles cuz of what made em No move to replace em..dreams chase em but negate when race comes

Nice Multies Flip, Although This Was My Favorite Part of Ya Drop

But We Gave Them Rights It's Not There Fault There Murderers/ Ignorant Shits Will You Use That Excuse The 5th Time They Murder Us

Absolute Dope Good Use of Wordplay Messiah

didn't know the passion of christ, actually happened in life/
we went to iraq in a fight, over the Saudis, hijacking a flight

You Lil' Delinquent You.. Usual Superb Structure & Meaning in A Plex Drop As Always

it's a feather's whisk from territorial trips on December's blend
all on a count of trends from then corrupted, 1970's president

Can Never Get Enough From QZ.. Excellent Use of History n Wordplay

Ya never see the homeless people lookin mentally vacant
Weathered and aged, but all you say is "it's irrelevant, ain't it?
Tell him to go get a job he's better endeavorin wages

It's Amazing You've Been On The Site 4 A Couple Weeks n You've Mastered What Most Ppl Are Trying 2 Achieve. This Was Fuckin' Dope Catch22!!

crash at night with no steering
no fearing, crying in shame with no tearing
i must be nearing, my final destination
conversations, laughs, its all im facing
heart is racing, mind wont stop pacing
lifes in my palms, grippin tight for the taking

You Had Something Here..But The Content Seems A Lil' Different From The Others. Try 2 Relate Your Rhymes 2 The Concept of What's Being Discussed. Otherwise Excellent Use of Wordplay & Multies. Great Structure 2 Shady!!

[Borat]

Me too!

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[complexity]

I added my verse, sorry for being a latecomer. I did say I wanted on this though assholes.

I will leave feedback tomorrow, if I have time.

[Munteskue_lol]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NSBSAfRLywQ

this would flow well to this

[R.E.I.]

Flipsides was the best

[- Mutual -]

mayne i think everyone held their own on this very nice drops from everybody plex's i felt was pretty good like but i'm most feelin Flip And Catch's dope drop people we'll keep'em comin haha