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Have been real busy lately , promise i'll leave feed on tracks later today , i posted this song up before but it would not work i have the link to the final copy now anyway so tell me what you think ,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fXfCbHdHGcU

kause mc - first verse
me - second verse
blakie boy - third verse
nutta mc - fourth verse
hook - all of us


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Re: It's on

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beats nice...the hook is hot... first dude got nice flow... it sounds like he got an accent...but does not hold back at all... second dude...came off hard with the lirics...i think one line chopped but i think... but i can accredit that to swagg... third dude..i like...he got that i dont give a fuck start.. Hittin niggas hard tho..def diff style...last dude got flow... stayed on point the whole way.. even when i thought he was fallin he brought it back...this shit is tight...hip hop doing things for the uk it seems... I LIKE THIS... nice drop fellas
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Re: It's on

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okay... so the effect on the hook was annoying... and bled too much over the rest of the hook... its hot but change it... other wise this was good... beats a bit too loud... second verse fell off a few times... but picked it up again... third verse wasn't feelin it... u fell off here n there and ur ad libs were off... you guys need studio equipment lol... u'll sound so much better... this was hot... beat was good too... liked that alot... and besides which one were u sequence????
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It Has Potential.. Would Like 2 Hear More Though
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Re: It's on

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thank's for the feed , i was the second verse lawgix .
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