Short Freestyle Abt Intimitating rapper

[deafshady]

raps not real G just imitating beef mcs aint been real since the deaths of pac and big 1st off fuck jay-z he aint been true to hiphop since his 1st lp Nas killing me on that political shit dissed pac in 96 now he trying to become him man get off his dik 50 everything you put out is garbage i respect u as a business man but not as an artist eminem u had to good lps but since den you've fell off G lil wayne u not even worth mentoning ur rhymes are crap if hip hop is dead u playd a big part on dat

-- Sun May 02, 2010 11:53 am --

whooaa i see everyone view but no feed dammmnnn

[MOEstradamus]

raps not real G just imitating beef mcs aint been real since the deaths of pac and big 1st off fuck jay-z he aint been true to hiphop since his 1st lp Nas killing me on that political shit dissed pac in 96 now he trying to become him man get off his dik 50 everything you put out is garbage i respect u as a business man but not as an artist eminem u had to good lps but since den you've fell off G lil wayne u not even worth mentoning ur rhymes are crap if hip hop is dead u playd a big part on dat

first off like i told the other dude tc about it try and break it up if you can...

but ill peep this

ok this was kinda hot here and there but id have to say its a lil simple but it was a nice read try and break it up a bit also when you said big put periods between the b.i.g so we know your tryna spell it and not say it... no multis at all i mean its a freestyle but they can be used other than that not back id like to see your writtins before i rate you

[trubblecleff]

its pretty basic straight forward nothin to think about you made your point i disagree but... to each his own for a freestyle it was smoothe

[FlipSide]

I was coo to me...u made the point on it and it flowed descent to me... just pick up on the structure tip a lil..

[Munteskue_lol]

it was okay, man. just practice

[Haz]

raps not real G just imitating beef mcs aint been real since the deaths of pac and big 1st off fuck jay-z he aint been true to hiphop since his 1st lp Nas killing me on that political shit dissed pac in 96 now he trying to become him man get off his dik 50 everything you put out is garbage i respect u as a business man but not as an artist eminem u had to good lps but since den you've fell off G lil wayne u not even worth mentoning ur rhymes are crap if hip hop is dead u playd a big part on dat



Hm, Sort of weird.. Cause i disagree with everyone in This thread.

I thought this shit was Actually Solid lol Had a Good Flow to it N funny at That. Liked How you didn't just diss rappers U gave Reasons why they Pissed you lol

Like the 50 line,
you should spit line by line vs One big Block of Words with Rhymes in um.

Anyways I Thought this Was Decent U Def Got Potential

Stay Up N Keep Dropping