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Dreaming

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Scarce grows my simplicity, imagery intertwined
dinner time symettry, thoughts is simply divine
so I stroll amongst fakes, artificial limbs to walk on
we could talk god, or the stars, lyrically armstrong
development is dazed, and my soul is motionless
a potion mixed, deprived from states of Atlantis...
ocean splits, the planets dance in unison, openings
light's release the titan, burial grounds find caged demons
I swear I was on track, until she became unlaced...
dreamin' of Aphrodite, I can't retrace my evening
a silhoutte dances in the back of a candle lit room
I try to keep the dirt under me, a scandalous broom
dismantled with whom? we share lineage of lost ancients
different lifetimes, a heart that came across vacant
thought's evasive, my results share hope like elixers
muscles contract, shes holdin' me like old souls with liquor
time ages the wine, between us time raises the sigh's
she climbs the steps and raises protection to exempt us
her screams to the heavens cause erection to All-limp-us/Olympus
behold the power of a beauty that none find connect
as dime's collect, I sprint to others, flyer then Hermes
sadly my thoughts produce better, then acquired absurd speech
the fates betray me and I find myself floatin' in Styx River
awaking with my trident, wet, I am Posiedon, difference bitter
I embelish my soul as the wolf thats crying to the moon
I will never get that feeling again, until I'm defying gravity...Boom

awaken....another night we shall meet again
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Re: Dreaming

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that shit was tight.... i was gonna say that u saw the clash of the titans but the characters werent there lol... flows tight concepts hot... i enjoyed readin this shit...had to read some parts twice just to make shure i was following right...good use of the gods by the way.. none gone to waste

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peep this!
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I like this drop. Nice flow and great topic. Somethin' different and pretty deep.

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dismantled with whom? we share lineage of lost ancients
different lifetimes, a heart that came across vacant

the fates betray me and I find myself floatin' in Styx River
awaking with my trident, wet, I am Posiedon, difference bitter
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Re: Dreaming

Post by HKX »

I had 2 read dis twice u def got off on it I was like wtf haha man wordplay is ill, flow is nice 2 liked like da Posiedon line. Dis was a good read keep droppin' man
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again on point just do a cd let me know and i will buy it
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still my favorite piece :P
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Re: Dreaming

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This one line in particular stood out to me by itself as genius:
time ages the wine, between us time raises the sigh's
Not much to say about the rest of it, it was dope, but I've come to expect so much from you. Respect.
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Hey...thanx bro...bump for part two
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