no pause

[UFO]

this is a song i wrote awhile back called no pause just me a beat just str8 spittin let me know if its good or not
my lyrical mastery got u fag mcs mad at me
cuz u aint bad as me the microphone majesty
i smack u wack mcs wit so much accuracy
that any nigga wit the audacity to battle me
ends up a casualty
i hit em hard like MK fatalities
so face reality
u aint got the skills to
be approoachin me wit them weak quotes u see
cuz i ferociously roast mcs wit my poetry
n noticablly aint no one gettin close to me
even if u niggas was standin close to me
i spit fire in every word i write
so ur in for a fight
its like toby maguire
against Kimbo slice
u vs. me thats shit aint right
thats like going up against a tank wit a butter knife
i strike deadly like a cobras bite
wreck mics from morning to nights
mesmorizin like Jordan whenever he took flight
ya dudes will get sliced get smoked like crack pipes
cuz the words i write shine bright like sunlight
now who be that raw cat spittin them raw raps
wit the verbal combat that stomps acts
and bomb cats like when the US bombed IRAQ
who spits facts that fuken impact like big bats
to ur knee caps
who ll tell u ur shits wack admit that
u bitch ass
b4 i hit that bitch ass
wit a picke axe quick fast
n rip that throat cuz ima sick ass
n the way u talk shit
u would swear ur assholes
where ur lips at
i came to fix that
wit these sick raps
n this flow wit no flaws
continously wit no pause

[QwarterZ]

the best way to get people to peep your work is if you reply to there's first
it's only fair.......keep writing shun shun

[Loon E Lou]

well at least u showed people you know how to rhyme. sounded like some dr. seuss typa shit.

[FlipSide]

there shure were a lot of rhymes on there but the scheme was kinda funny...easy read tho...keep dropping

[UFO]

a thnx 4 tha feed back ill keep writin i know was a little simplistic but hey thats the kinda feedback i need to try n get better