Mind Altered

[QwarterZ]

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all the rage huh?


If it was on national discovery they couldn't uncover me
it's 9 11 thuggery, conspiracy mixed with silence n tumbleweeds
I walk a trail no man could run, quote melodies, and other needs
fate is a mad man, sidelined like socrates with troubled dreams
the debaucle of sight, muddles me, so I stay up hella late
with quills that deliver me tranquil, my mind is feather weight
I never date, I just give you expectation like Nostradamus
grandfather told me otherwise, 12 on top so i cross the clock with (hands high)
while they squeeze the Tekken like bandai I could toss the glock quick
but homey don't go that route, I bring the lip gloss to the optic
circle the chapped sight, deliver flame to the hand, Prometheus
like codeine to lips, without the cold or regulation I just OD and trip
so while things move slowly I slip, disappear like the protein i give
then it's a wrap, like my legs closely I sit, medicated opium wrist
meditating, now I reappear in the eyes of the most aggravated
the hype is painstaking, Atlas to the world I just had to make it....

[deafshady]

damn!! i feel that

[QwarterZ]

thanx my dude!

[K KiLLaH]

If it was on national discovery they couldn't uncover me
it's 9 11 thuggery, conspiracy mixed with silence n tumbleweeds
I walk a trail no man could run, quote melodies, and other needs
fate is a mad man, sidelined like socrates with troubled dreams

favorite part overall 7/10
very consistent nice closer

[Borat]

Mmmmm. The flow in this is fluid. Good lyrics aswell, you are able to say something and still make it sound cool. Keep it up son.

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[Phasewon]

Nice shit, wasn't anything too mind blowing, yet
The flow and the vocab was ill, the multies were
Simple, yet some supa lyrical shit wouldn't fit
well with this subject, so the rhymescheme was
executed perfectly and the multies didn't come across
forced at all, good shit.

[FlipSide]

For real i was feeling the beggining of it... flow was on point but i kinda got lost with the multies.. maybe its my begginer mind... Over all i enjoyed it ^^^