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My LiFe in ColoR

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M-Vario
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My LiFe in ColoR

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my world is different, my skies are purple
no lies crimson lines inside my circle
means i got red eyes then i might hurt you
no life signs just blue face in a square box
opportunity came to my door, dont u dare knock
put up spare locks, but they dodge us when the spot us
actn in your role dead beat dads who play fathas
yellow light on life I stay cautious
my faith i keep locked up but its those who would still rob us
black can cover your sins from man but not the spectrum of yur goddess
its the oddest, an orange glow from a house of love and kinship
until the point of destination is above their limit
push for the green at the finish only at the cost of friendship



a quick key of somet stuff going through my mind
Last edited by M-Vario on Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:48 pm, edited 1 time in total.
it dont gotta be summer for me to come up north with da birds~Murda for bricks
or Murda by numbers WHEN i Point the 1-2 gauges tre' or fo-five at ya six
- me
AKA Tito Fairbanks
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Re: My LiFe in ColoR

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my world is different, my skies are purple no lies crimson lines inside my circle.
That's badass man. I like this for being a quick piece. I'm happy to see more coming through DC keep em comin man I like reading your poetry.

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Re: My LiFe in ColoR

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my world is different, my skies are purple
no lies crimson lines inside my circle
means i got red eyes then i might hurt you
no life signs just blue face in a square box
opportunity came to my door, dont u dare knock
^^^^^^^^that beginnin' was siiiick

I'm feelin' it bro
it's very emotional and very well written
especially when you get to the fathers part
I'm feelin' it....I'd like to see it extended tho'
even tho' it was quick
I feel like you didn't finish it like you should
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