GigaByte Vs. YungDosia

[YungDosia]

10 Lines, due 24 hrs after u check in.

this is my check.

g/l

[gigabyte-007]

Check mate. Do ya thang

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-- Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:44 pm --

I Aint Calling U Elderly, But This Will BURN AND CHOKE NECKS!/ Cause This Grams Only Young (young dosia) He Aint TURNED TO DOPE YET!/ A WORM AND JOKE VET!, So Ima Blaze Tha Fifth, 2 SCARE YOU, SERIOUS!/ Cause U Only Blaze Tha Fifth, Wit Gurls Wit No HAIR OR PERIODS!/ Bitch, U Delerious, Bout To Post? Ima Have To GUN YA IN A LANDFILL!/ But I Dont Mean Posting A Verse, I Mean Ya COMING TO A STANDSTILL

Face it kid, ur text is HALLOW IN PARTS, I'll shatter it and make you SWALLOW THE SHARDS//... Cut open ur chest and empty ur ^organs down the drain^ and force you to FOLLOW YOUR HEART// young dawg fuck ya CLAIMS, BREAK IT, punch ur mouth til the PAINS TASTED, you coundnt ^bare the thought^ it I ^stripped ur BRAIN NAKED^

-- Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:47 pm --

Done your up ma man

[YungDosia]

oh shit my bad my nigga didnt even know u dropped...i will drop tonight

-- Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:10 pm --

...BEAST MODE ON UM...

Nigga i drop bombs with this shit..............im so sick and ill its hurtin
He's so pathetic, hes actually trying to text from a phone...but it still aint workin
U never got a girl in ur life fagget, even offering her a trip to japan
his chicks a man, and when i asked around they said its cuz Gigabyte...every dick he can
Claims he rolls around with the og's, putting shells in ya mandibles
Bitch u got no homeys, ya last big dog byte...was getting attacked by animals
Dude's just acting hard, but his home life is great he pray his parents never break up
Cuz at home we all know u got a solid foundation.....to match your make up
Kid what cd's u got out? no station would play yo shit on a high rate
Cuz last time he got a request.............was on fuckin myspace


10 key'd

[deville009]

Punches-Dosia
Personals-Dosia
Flow-Dosia
Creativity-Gig
Enjoyment-Gig
Multies-Gig
Wordplay-Gig

punches i felt D was more on the attack
personals D directed his lines more at Gig
Flow Gig ya Flow was hard to follow, its good to see someone use a different style but its hard to follow.
creativity- didnt see none really but i gave it to Gig cause he was more complex
Multis Gig had longer multies as for Dosia his were the simple 2 3 sound better if it was audio.
wordplay- liked the follow your heart line

vote Gig

[Riggz]

I'll take the time to break this down:

Giga
I Aint Calling U Elderly, But This Will BURN AND CHOKE NECKS!/
Cause This Grams Only Young (young dosia) He Aint TURNED TO DOPE YET!/
2/5 didn’t like the setup, delivery and punch was there tho

A WORM AND JOKE VET!, So Ima Blaze Tha Fifth, 2 SCARE YOU, SERIOUS!/
Cause U Only Blaze Tha Fifth, Wit Gurls Wit No HAIR OR PERIODS!/
2/5 redundant, but the punch was nasty.. lol

Bitch, U Delerious, Bout To Post? Ima Have To GUN YA IN A LANDFILL!/
But I Dont Mean Posting A Verse, I Mean Ya COMING TO A STANDSTILL
2/5 work on your setups Gig...your punches would come out more solid man.

Face it kid, ur text is HALLOW IN PARTS, I'll shatter it and make you SWALLOW THE SHARDS//...
Cut open ur chest and empty ur ^organs down the drain^ and force you to FOLLOW YOUR HEART//
2.5/5 graphic, I like it.

young dawg fuck ya CLAIMS, BREAK IT, punch ur mouth til the PAINS TASTED,
you coundnt ^bare the thought^ it I ^stripped ur BRAIN NAKED^
2/5 meta was ok
10.5/25
Dosia
Nigga i drop bombs with this shit..............im so sick and ill its hurtin
He's so pathetic, hes actually trying to text from a phone...but it still aint workin
2/5 ok personal.. too much about Dosia

U never got a girl in ur life fagget, even offering her a trip to japan
his chicks a man, and when i asked around they said its cuz Gigabyte...every dick he can
2/5 flow was off, name play was there, set up was up lame…

Claims he rolls around with the og's, putting shells in ya mandibles
Bitch u got no homeys, ya last big dog byte...was getting attacked by animals
2/5 If this was a personal, a foot note might’ve helped… otherwise I ain’t feelin’ it.
Dude's just acting hard, but his home life is great he pray his parents never break up
Cuz at home we all know u got a solid foundation.....to match your make up
2/5 – Maybe I’m expecting too much, but this wasn’t a very hard punch.. creative, but not hard at all.

Kid what cd's u got out? no station would play yo shit on a high rate
Cuz last time he got a request.............was on fuckin myspace
1.5/5 I’ve heard this myspace one before… either way it’s played.
9.5/25
Honestly Dosia, you slept on kid. Once I structured his verse out, he actually had some nice flow and multies enough to out do your punches… which were mediocre to say the least. I’ve seen you come harder. Maybe you should spend a little more time on these battles, than just dropping a “quick key”?

[gigabyte-007]

You broke it down nicely riggz..nw cast ya vote ma man or didn't I get it?

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[YungDosia]

bllaaaah uppin this bullshit