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e-Thieves!
Riggz expanded a new set of semantics to brandish
For bandits to take advantage after I hand’em a bandage
Damper your candid portrait or I damage the canvas
Surveying the mantra Replayin phrases draped in my manna
I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed
I was content to let it run leave vultures under the gun
Freeze the tundra to tongues and even run with the bums
But umm I lit up the firmament with terms of endearment
Tell’em “Thats a nice verse” while using sermons to steer them
For now my style is on the house without risk of tracking anklets
Misogynist, pop a pimp when they insist on slapping language
Vanquish scores to settle broken down with mortar and pestle
If Riggz ever sign to a Major, it’ll be more to embezzle
Blah -
For bandits to take advantage after I hand’em a bandage
Damper your candid portrait or I damage the canvas
Surveying the mantra Replayin phrases draped in my manna
I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed
I was content to let it run leave vultures under the gun
Freeze the tundra to tongues and even run with the bums
But umm I lit up the firmament with terms of endearment
Tell’em “Thats a nice verse” while using sermons to steer them
For now my style is on the house without risk of tracking anklets
Misogynist, pop a pimp when they insist on slapping language
Vanquish scores to settle broken down with mortar and pestle
If Riggz ever sign to a Major, it’ll be more to embezzle
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Re: e-Thieves!
shit was ill man i liked the whole thing, i think the flow got choppy wit like 3 words when i read the first time but the second time was much better
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: e-Thieves!
Riggz expanded a new set of semantics to brandish
For bandits to take advantage after I hand’em a bandage
Damper your candid portrait or I damage the canvas
Surveying the mantra Replayin phrases draped in my manna
I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
dope, dope, and doper.. whole shit was bonkers man, opener kill em tho.. definately skills shinning thru.. nice drop riggz multis, content the whole shit
stay ^
For bandits to take advantage after I hand’em a bandage
Damper your candid portrait or I damage the canvas
Surveying the mantra Replayin phrases draped in my manna
I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
dope, dope, and doper.. whole shit was bonkers man, opener kill em tho.. definately skills shinning thru.. nice drop riggz multis, content the whole shit
stay ^

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you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
Re: e-Thieves!
Yo Riggz! this was crazy you really getting up there
I'm diggin' errythin' you writing!
I remember how you started off and now your just snappin' on these ishes
killer intro! keep writing!
I'm diggin' errythin' you writing!
I remember how you started off and now your just snappin' on these ishes
killer intro! keep writing!
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dope shit amigo. sumtn i enjoyed readin. elevated flo and errything. this the type of shit i like homie so keep doin what u do. shiiiit. u help me wit my text, ill help u on ur productions. haha. dope dawg. keep it lit homie
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That was hard... I been takin the temperature of this site a lickel bit.. and you seem to be one of the nicest... peace bro.
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You gotta Deal Lou!Loon E Lou wrote:dope shit amigo. sumtn i enjoyed readin. elevated flo and errything. this the type of shit i like homie so keep doin what u do. shiiiit. u help me wit my text, ill help u on ur productions. haha. dope dawg. keep it lit homie
Underrated I would Say Vaughn, I set the battle up for us. Hope I can deliver the same emotions in my battles.Vaughn wrote:That was hard... I been takin the temperature of this site a lickel bit.. and you seem to be one of the nicest... peace bro.
When you start off on sites like these, you gotta get a feel of what's goin on. I found that simplicity wasn't the best for ILLEST. It's actually got very skillful writers.qwarterzone wrote:Yo Riggz! this was crazy you really getting up there
I'm diggin' errythin' you writing!
I remember how you started off and now your just snappin' on these ishes
killer intro! keep writing!
Defi, I'm one who appreciates your shit too.. so keep droppinModern Defiance wrote:
dope, dope, and doper.. whole shit was bonkers man, opener kill em tho.. definately skills shinning thru.. nice drop riggz multis, content the whole shit
stay ^
Wow, three times to get the flow.. i must be slippin.. I'll work on it Syms.. thanks.~Symbolikull~ wrote:shit was ill man i liked the whole thing, i think the flow got choppy wit like 3 words when i read the first time but the second time was much better
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Re: e-Thieves!
this shit was nice bro good multis nothing really forced at good shit id say 8.5/10 goodshit

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Re: e-Thieves!
yeah nice flow on this got better in the middle then went a very lil bit downhill but over all dope multies and a very nearly consistent flow done well my man riggz we'll have to collab some time on scripts
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!

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Preciate it Moe/Mutual. Thanks for checkin' it out.
Re: e-Thieves!
good shit, vocabulary was a stand out i think, multi's were on par. it was a decent read man that's for sure, the opener was pretty sick kept me intrested, flow got abit choppy.. but it didnt really effect the written.. stay up.


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Re: e-Thieves!
Riggz expanded a new set of semantics to brandish
For bandits to take advantage after I hand’em a bandage
Damper your candid portrait or I damage the canvas
Cool cool,
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Disagree.
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed
LoL
I was content to let it run leave vultures under the gun
Freeze the tundra to tongues and even run with the bums
What you mean to Tongues? ..
But umm I lit up the firmament with terms of endearment
Tell’em “Thats a nice verse” while using sermons to steer them
Nah.
For now my style is on the house without risk of tracking anklets
Misogynist, pop a pimp when they insist on slapping language
Like this.
Vanquish scores to settle broken down with mortar and pestle
If Riggz ever sign to a Major, it’ll be more to embezzle
Could of came with a better Banger...
Anyways i just thought this was put Together Poorly, in My own opinion.
Feel like you focused so Much on inners n connecting 2 lines together that u took away Solidness from a Overall Verse,
The vocab was Cool, multis was Aiight.
Anyways i've Seen U Drop Better but this Was Decent.
Stay Up N Keep Dropping
For bandits to take advantage after I hand’em a bandage
Damper your candid portrait or I damage the canvas
Cool cool,
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Disagree.
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed
LoL
I was content to let it run leave vultures under the gun
Freeze the tundra to tongues and even run with the bums
What you mean to Tongues? ..
But umm I lit up the firmament with terms of endearment
Tell’em “Thats a nice verse” while using sermons to steer them
Nah.
For now my style is on the house without risk of tracking anklets
Misogynist, pop a pimp when they insist on slapping language
Like this.
Vanquish scores to settle broken down with mortar and pestle
If Riggz ever sign to a Major, it’ll be more to embezzle
Could of came with a better Banger...
Anyways i just thought this was put Together Poorly, in My own opinion.
Feel like you focused so Much on inners n connecting 2 lines together that u took away Solidness from a Overall Verse,
The vocab was Cool, multis was Aiight.
Anyways i've Seen U Drop Better but this Was Decent.
Stay Up N Keep Dropping

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Re: e-Thieves!
The rhyming side was a throwback to some past MC's from the scriptures. The transitions, flow, and ideas were all lucid. I enjoyed this piece.
Keep dropping.
"I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed"
Keep dropping.
"I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed"
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damn your flow was fuckin' nuts on this, it came off my tongue so smoothly. vocab was not too shabby, wordplay was there, multis, you name it, this had it, well, mostly. But anyway...
"I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed"
^that right there is what had me like "whoa" haha. nice drop dunny. 1
"I play bananas even though the post is most apocalyptic
One should betroth props on drops that flow awfully optimistic
Jocks opt to miss it but in positions without degrees
My intentions to spot a sentence I didn’t allow to breed"
^that right there is what had me like "whoa" haha. nice drop dunny. 1
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Haha, guess I'll have to up my distorted cerebration.ReFleXiOn wrote:vocab was not too shabby,

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