1st battle on here

[da nemesis]

this my 1st time bein on here...lookin 4 sum competition...any takers?

[Absolute]

Ill go. Set it up n drop. 5 bars. ill respond when I can, by friday night @ the latest

[Quix]

set it up dude!

[Absolute]

lmao @ me n quix always respondin to the same callouts

[da nemesis]

5 bars?..kinda short but ok


take a look at my elevation as i perform lyrical meditation//
pressure escalatin at the moment of levetation//


deep thoughts salivatin on the mic, leavin the mic blazin//
nigga u yet 2 see u facin the rap version of jason//


i detach mind from soul on levels of biblical amputation//
im takin the #1 spot, u suffer career cancellation//


see i been in this a min and i was known as the ceaser//
i left 4 a min, they said i died, so im back reincarnated in the form of the reaper//


u gonna be a witness like them jehovas people by the way ill make u a believer//
u fuckin with raps reaper so allow me 2 introduce u to the crypts keeper//

[Absolute]

Not where we usually battle but whatever..

Welcome to the site!! N Now that trash is OVER..I BLAST COLDER n treat his verse like Jewish faith and PASSOVER/
Throw SMASHED BOULDERS at your GLASS SHOULDERS, nigga how you gone drop ass then ask whos the CROWN HOLDER?!//1

The LIES OVER.. you FOLKLORE TEACHER! You no longer HOLD THE FLOOR, SPEAKER!/
He a mini me, just MORE WEAKER..roll with two bloods and FOUR HEATERS since you the CRYP KEEPER!//2

ALAS, AT LAST someones here to BLAST at you and your PEOPLE/
Ya verse is so SEE THROUGH! NEMESIS?? ... Nigga does this look like RESIDENT EVIL?//3 (lmao)

Naw.. just THE poor budget SEQUEL, without the INTERCHANGING, ZOMBIES WAITING plus its only slightly ENTERTAINING/
FEEL LIKE YOUR GAMING? Me too, specially since his verse clearly had no RETICLE FOR AIMING!//4 (where ya personals @ lol)

Just STATING, OVERALL YOU BLOWIN BALLS and your styles in need of a MAJOR OVERHAUL/
I SMOKE HERBS WEARIN OVERALLS! Should change names to "Tactical Nuke"..cuz you join a board n be like "Fuck it ill BLOW EM ALL!"//5


Not my best but enough! Uppin for votes

[da nemesis]

lol nice...ill say u got me...the wheres ur personals line was nice...but u know i aint gonna come out throwin all i got off the top rite lol...well meet again.. i see the level yall at now

[Absolute]

yeah...havin vocab and all that helps, which I see you got, you just gotta learn to divert that creativty into a way that comes at the person. YOu cant win on this site without personals and punches in every bar. Stay active and battle for two weeks and I guarantee youll see improvement. I look forward to our next meeting, and I feel you about not sayin everythin you got, but if you dont say it, someone else on here will, and nobody wants to be considered a biter.

[da nemesis]

yea i feel u...aight well meet again..keep an eye out 4 me

[Absolute]

for sure. next time I expect you to hand me a loss.

[SirV's U Write]

Vote - ab's Harder hitting , More complex , more creative both did ya thing but Absoulte is better ...

[Absolute]

1-0 my way

[Absolute]

2-0

[LogiK]

Lol, it's not an official battle, so no matter who gets the most vote in this thread, no one gets the win on there record.

[Absolute]

This I understand. But what am I supposed to do, copy and post our verses into one post and start a battle thread? It aint my fault he posted his verse in the wrong spot, and Ive asked two mods to move this damn thread and nobody does. If people voting then well keep tally. if it doesnt count then oh well...i still want feedback on the verse.