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merkz v EkomS(EkomS)

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merkz v EkomS(EkomS)

Post by Merkz »

5 barz
house rules
drop wenever
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

k im bored so i'll just drop now i guess

i'll cause this fag-to-scream from rappin-scenes, i'm a constant addiction like the crack-in-fiends/
the midwest with magazines strapped-in-jeans, but since when did Nelly join the Latin Kings? (his avatar)/

first-to-pile-the-news, like a 'happy ending'.. u'll 'smile-n-lose'/
versatile-reviews, cuz 'beatin merkz' in a battle is 'child-abuse' (underaged)/

i'm a visible apparite like a glowin-phantom, when clarity spits.. ur just flowin-random/
i'll kidnap u and start holdin-ransoms, u ain't swingin fists.. ur just throwin-tantrums/

u'll leave with accents and mass-dents across ur skull when i blast-sense/
i'll force ya flashbacks thru glass-lens, ur done kid..change ur name to past-tense/

fuck a 5th bar 4's a lucky number lol
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Post by Merkz »

you dropped 4 so al only drop 4

This nigga what respect he don't want fame u gotta learn to spell ya name
Your ass is lame im taking aim leave u with more holes that a battle ship game

Some people get better when they rhyme was up wid u dawg u stuck in time
merkz b poppin the nines people dnt do drugs or collabs wid u coz they dont trust your lines

Im only young but this nigga in diapers my bars be more venomous then a deadly viper
Coz no1 nows u dawg but every1 knows me like the DC sniper

Don't wanna rub u the wrong way but i spit pefection so grab ya durex 4 extra protection
coz u carnt come hard in any section not even wid dick enhancer an a lyrical erection

lets get some votes in this bitch
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Lmao do we even seriously need to fucking vote?.....Wow speechless
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Post by Merkz »

nigga y u hatin so much man am here to step ma game up n niggaz b just fuckin about wateva man
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Post by Conspiracy »

Lol you use nursery rhymes which barely flowed really played out punchlines even my grandma used. the fact you said you are trying to elevate and just spit 4 bars because he did was a big disadvantage on your part oh BTW I DIDNT KNOW TELLING THE TRUTH IS HATING
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Post by Merkz »

lets say if u said 'verse was way below par blah blah blah' n then said how it could b improved then thats real help to a nigga but just pullin my rhymes down pffffffff
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Post by complexity »

Very good point. Conspiracy no need of that. I'd challenge the little bastard. And diss him for not responding in our battle ;]
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Post by Conspiracy »

For one how about enroll your self in "Evil school" even though the teachers are slackers!!
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Post by Merkz »

im always lookin for ways to elevate man thanks for the advice
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol.. ok well conspiracy use to be just as bad if not worse so i dont know y he's trying to talk shit ... but yea it was pretty weak.. i'll help u out even tho im a bit lazy lol.. im sure u'll be able to learn it quickly tho
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Post by complexity »

Cat Sweep

Overall: Ekoms

Merkz, not to shabby though
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Post by Viral »

ima vote for ekoms....merkz u did a good job...keep it up and i say in about 2 weeks dere will be a HUGE lyrical change in ur bars...most def....jst keep it up...im not gonna explain much on y i think E won...but alot of merkz stuff was of course basic...no offense...u got some nifty punches tho ill admit that...jst gotta remove the fillers and jst make it pure punch no pullin em...
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Post by Subsist »

Im voting for Merkz , he had more metas/similies and i liked his punches. Ekoms had more multis/flow but i barely understood anything, call me stupid but thats that.
Merkz you have to improve your spelling because I had a hard time figuring shit out. And you're saying dumb things like
"This nigga what respect he don't want fame"
he cant want whatever the hell he wants i dont see any problem , assuming "what = want".
And when you need to fill your lines (all the shit before the last rhyming word in your piece) with something more usefull , "your ass is lame" just doesnt cut it , add a personal or something its your opportunity to write anythin you want and doesnt have to rhyme.
And conspiracy ya man stop bringing people down.
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Post by Conspiracy »

Lol stop bringing people down? lol bitch stfu you talk shit i speak facts get your shit straight
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