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I attack with an ax wearin' a Mayan mask
I'll chop your spine in half, then go watch the women fire dance
I spit flames atop a volcanic cliff face
drinkin' gin straight from a flask with a lizard skin case
gettin' shit faced while the sky begins t'spit rain
The sun is settin', so it's almost time t'start the hunting session
I'm sharpening weapons with 4 points and 7 edges
They're called hunga mungas and they gleam underneath la luna
You're a chunka tuna floatin' off the coastline of Cuba
I'm a great white that's gonna snap my jaws right through ya

I attack with an ax wearin' a Mayan mask
I'll chop your spine in half, then go watch the women fire dance
I spit flames atop a volcanic cliff face
drinkin' gin straight from a flask with a lizard skin case
gettin' shit faced while the sky begins t'spit rain



this shit had great flow!! you lost me on the last part though!


Nice drop!

yeah i'm with the consensus here, the last three lines fell off hard, beginning was excellent.

I appreciate the feedback..

This was purdy nice, I really can't pick it apart since erryone else did...

but I like the beginnin' its like you reciting history to all the young'ns definitly on of my favorite aspects in certain rhymes keep writing!