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Quix
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Another side to the story

Post by Quix »

Aigh check it, This some Real talk off the top type shit!

hope yah like it


Believe me, Quix a vet wid Explicit Sets
Conclusive Raps that can Eat ya Chest
Exclusive Crack n Exquisite Text
ya'll Redundent Crap meet ma Implicit Best
i've Inflicted Stres; steady on mah game plus getting Consistant Sex
I'm Presistant Yes so its like eryone watching like da Restricted Net
let this SHit just Rest cuz I Conquer n Ridicule
cuz ma Father was Critical and a bother when Physical
that made me a Cynical Child wid Original Style
Now like a Subliminal File I Share knowledge in Brail
One smart nigguh like I was in College at Yale
I called it n Failed, now I'm often Hauled into Jail
few minors but equaled four Walls n guard Rails
Learned a lot From da Consequences
and make Songs aren't senseless
if yours are, sorry but don't get Offended
I lived the life that you glorify
YA'll da sort of guys with grants n who can afford to lie
so abort ya Trys cuz most ya shit be fallen way short of Wise
cause in the street you can't Resort tah Pride
so excuse me if I don't read or believe the Songs that lie
ya'll talkin Bombs supllies; but in my hood really ya Moms can Die



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Re: Another side to the story

Post by Prophet »

yoo I actually thought this was pretty ill, at first glance it seems like just a multi display, but you were able to make sense of your lines, so it didn't feel like a bunch of words strung together, y'know? Overall nice drop, i was feelin' it.
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Re: Another side to the story

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thanks dog much appreciated!
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Re: Another side to the story

Post by DaPrince »

One thing that I'm constantly amazed with is the ability to express deep thoughts and emotions and still explain with multi's and inners that make it sound dope but when you actually read it you catch the underlying meaning and you've done that well with this drop. It's like a glimpse or summary of your background and I could see you going deeper into some of the subjects discussed if you wanted, but for what its worth this drop is dope as is. Good shit bro.
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