Quicky of the top

[justRJ]

Your not alone im right here with you smokin hopein to one day be spoken as ispiration cause we all toke and dream on day will make it famous and one day know as the lastest new new cool cool kid on the block spitting ryhmes that every listen to. i just want to let you know your not the only i feel for you im here for you on a no homo just want you know imm always going to be real with you. not many see me as i see me just the lonely stoner solo token on mix blunt of blow trying to get high past the day by and not remember anything not even you bye.

[QwarterZ]

I liked it off the image in ur avy
I see where the inspiration came from
it was good but needs some work as far as structure goes
rhymes got some truth but need some extra build up
I'd drop the no homo line...LoL! the saying is dead
and....well I don't know what else to say
if this is quick off the top next time take time! ya dig!