Moments

[Def-init]

Life started disliked.
The punch spiked. A mind psyched.
No light, third strike,
North or South, birth or death
Flames to flesh, ashes to wind,
Time to mend, rivers to bend.
Angels, an angle of reflection...
Not contained in my conception!
No moments, no emotions.
Cosmic motion, cataclysmic devotion.
My mind fluid flowing like oceans!
No spark. Tragic Whispers once dark.
I "Question the resurrection"
quoting 'The Gospel of Mark'!
Stripes, stars. Leafs and red bars.
lands of the full. Population, psychotic!
The brave, victims of narcotics
Explosions and limbs, flags and sins
A soldier, living life under Jehovah
Oil, the spoils! Thunder and recoil.
I voted... No one listens to minorities!
The true cries that defy protection,
Insurance seeking opportunistic infections.
House or condo? Horns or Halo?
Here today, gone tomorrow
That's living life in the ghetto!!!

I was raised with foul play
Hell's Symphony bumpin each day
I don’t wanna see no more
Don’t wanna feel the earth no more!
Torn apart, torn into two
feelings ablaze, but I still feel for you
Born as one of the night breed
I'm a poetic gladiator...
That attacks quicker then light speed
My heart rate escalates
I lie in wait as my body hydrates
aint no tomb I won’t desecrate
Couldn’t be by her side as an inmate
Just want to see my Kin in college
Just want to see her defy
the suppression of knowledge
My esophagus screams apocalypse
Storming the land by airships.
Under the suns eclipse,
reading the demonic transcripts.
I'd be in a cage still,
if they could keep me in one!
I poke fun as my past deeds are undone,
I conquered my personal estate
like Alexander the great
due to the fact the unemployment rate
rises slightly higher than the inflation rate.
My hammer aint hollow.
It'll strike you like the God Apollo
I hate the labels society
feels free to shot like arrows
I bestow Words in sequence against the grain
I'm on the streets seeking "The Seventh Seal"
disregarding the pain,
Standing over charred remains
my mid section contorts
but not one tear shed in the courts
what’s breed in the bone
can’t be undone in the flesh.
Religion verses fiction,
a raw and realistic topical compilation!

[Haz]

Life started disliked.
The punch spiked. A mind psyched.
No light, third strike,
North or South, birth or death
Flames to flesh, ashes to wind,
Time to mend, rivers to bend.


Avatar Of Writers ! .. Lmfao
you always Write with crazy Concepts in ya pieces

Angels, an angle of reflection...
Not contained in my conception!
No moments, no emotions.
Cosmic motion, cataclysmic devotion.
My mind fluid flowing like oceans!
No spark. Tragic Whispers once dark.
I "Question the resurrection"
quoting 'The Gospel of Mark'!

Nah Man.. 2 Be Don't Think this goes write With what i Posted up There ^..

It just Seemed forced & not really Makin me say "oo"


House or condo? Horns or Halo?
Here today, gone tomorrow
That's living life in the ghetto!!!

Hot Ending ..
Just Felt Like everythin Leadin 2 that seemed Rushed or just Not well Thought out.


My esophagus screams apocalypse
Storming the land by airships.
Under the suns eclipse,
reading the demonic transcripts.
I'd be in a cage still,
if they could keep me in one!
I poke fun as my past deeds are undone,
I conquered my personal estate
like Alexander the great

Decent..



Anyways i Wasn't Feeling these 2 verses Like That i just Feel like you needa Come With a new 'Sound' Even though we can't hear it.. Start Experimenting, explore As a Writer n then get back On the shit u Were On Originally if u Want. But it's all About findin ya self..

This Was Decent Though Props On Length N Topic.
Keep Dropping

[QwarterZ]

This took awhile to read but I felt it
The structure was crazy kept me reading tho'
I was digging the vibe you was giving off

Storming the land by airships.
Under the suns eclipse,
reading the demonic transcripts.
I'd be in a cage still,
if they could keep me in one!
I poke fun as my past deeds are undone
^^^I was really feeling that

I'm feeling this man keep writing!