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I Used II (Tell me everything I did wrong... please)

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I Used II (Tell me everything I did wrong... please)

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1st audio and it's shitty.. but I'm proud of myself going out on a limb the first time. hehe.
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i have no idea what u said during the whole track... need to back off the mic... adlibs and under vocals need to be quieter than ur lead vocals... but otherwise u stayed on point with it... u flowed okay even tho i didn't understand wtf u said durin the 1:42 u spit... lol but it was cool... dig deep in the Creation Chamber... u'll find some good shit in here... mine are in here too... even tho i haven't posted one in a while... which i'll get that done soon enuff!!!
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Lawgix wrote:i have no idea what u said during the whole track... need to back off the mic... adlibs and under vocals need to be quieter than ur lead vocals... but otherwise u stayed on point with it... u flowed okay even tho i didn't understand wtf u said durin the 1:42 u spit... lol but it was cool... dig deep in the Creation Chamber... u'll find some good shit in here... mine are in here too... even tho i haven't posted one in a while... which i'll get that done soon enuff!!!
Thanks man... I'll back up off the mic with the adlibs.. turn it up on the vocals.
Much respect to all who do this with production skillz.
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