Chillax

[Petrafyne]

Here's Some Shit I Made A Few Days Ago, I Wouldn't Say It's Completely Finished But I Like It Enough To The Point Where I Don't Wanna Fuck It Up.

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[J-I-R]

Yea I would def say it's not done... like no bass at all... focus and make an ill bassline and this could be a lil down south banger homie

[Petrafyne]

There's A Bassline In There, You Might Need To Listen To It On A System, Or At Least Some Good Headphones. I Thought The Bass Was Too Much When I Played It In My Car. But Yeah Definitely Not Finished Yet, I'm Workin On That Now, I Prolly Post It When I'm Done.

[drunken jesus]

lol @ no bass dunno wtf dudes listening to it on, the bass is a lil too loud imo it distorts some on the lil drumbreak that comes in every 2 bars or so, the square synths just a lil too loud too, imo its pretty dope as is but sounds a lil empty some piano chords would sound dope or something else around that range its kinda lacking in the middle frequencys

[P.T.R-ins]

agree wit HJ ...piano could do thing or some trumpet in back that would follow this melody

[J-I-R]

lol @ no bass dunno wtf dudes listening to it on

Yea I dunno must be my comp speakers I am on a laptop haha but I still cant hear it at all

-- Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:44 am --

Ok I grabbed my headphones and I hear the base now def haha You just got it matching up with the bass drum on most parts except that lil run at the end

it's ok I THINK something else could be added as far as a melodic baseline to make it pop

also a mid range sound instrument (exp. a piano like the others said)

Would def brighten it up and make it crack