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Life is a Test

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This is my song "Life is a Test" This is for thoses that not into fast rap really. this is my life so it aint really about a curtain thing. im just sharin my story
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Im Feelin this one...

You told your story very well..

Good Shyt Homie..
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Post by eMCee Havic »

yeah for sure homie great song.. flow waS ON point. delivery was off in some points. but the lyrics and the beat made up for that.
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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Post by drunken jesus »

hook is not bad not real memorable though, flow and delivery are pretty on point for the most part, theirs some awkward pausing and parts where you trail off but they're pretty minor, you got a slight speach impediment (or you're mexican they seem to have a weird vocal inflection when they speach english that sounds similar) you seem to avoid it at times in the verses if you could manage to minimize it you'd be alot doper cause thats the only thing that really annoyed me about this track
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Hit this track up with some feed if you could.. Appreciated
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I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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