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TreTru
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2 My Greatest Fan!!

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finishing up the mixxing on this one .....haha..
It is what it is...so let me know what you think..


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To all my haters man X2 now my greatest fans
i said my haters man X2 yall my greatest fans
keep speakin my name out ya mouth your makin me famous man
i keep erasin their their doubts,and the whole time makin my grands
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Re: 2 My Greatest Fan!!

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like it,

"i keep erasin their their doubts,and the whole time makin my grands"


Didnt like that part of the chorus though, what kinda mic you use?
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Re: 2 My Greatest Fan!!

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we used an M-audio Sputnik for this one..

and thanks for the feed..i understand if some peeps dont
like it, but honest feed's appreciated..1
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Re: 2 My Greatest Fan!!

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I Think its iight...
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Re: 2 My Greatest Fan!!

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this was pretty tight dude... i liked it... i notice alot of emcees are goin the autotune route i guess it makes a track sound good... but i kinda noticed petrafyne fell off just a tad bit... but not too noticeable man... still a good track folk... keep droppin them hitz mayne!!!!!!!!

*edit* btw u n me still need to collab...
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Re: 2 My Greatest Fan!!

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hook was almost there second half needed delivered better, verses are nice flow switches were dope, petrafynes verse was nice but the autotune ruined it, beat was pretty wack (dunno if you did it or not) the vocal "AH" sounds awkward as hell theirs two basslines at the same frequency sounding really muddy and the drums were weird and not knocking, mixing could use a lil work too, overall this could've been a banger but a few things were off imo
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
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Re: 2 My Greatest Fan!!

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This Is Hot Shit. We Gotta Remix This. We Came A Long Way Homie.
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