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This is from another site i'm on .... my name there is killa4nia (so theres no confusion).

lyrics:
FUCK YOUR NATION-WE INVADIN LIKE SOME TERRORISTS
DA GANG'S TEAR'N FLESH-LIKE WE RAZOR'S TO WRISTS
YA'LL JUS SUICIDAL-N WE ON A MURDEROUS BINGE
MAKE THESE BITCHES CRINGE-INJECT'D THE SICK LIKE A SYRINGE
FUCK YOUR PENS-YOUR WRITTENS AIN'T HALF OF WHAT I'M SPITT'N
SPLITT'N NENO FROM HIS EGO-N LEAVE HIM LIKE HIRO-FAKIN HIS IMAGE !
YOU PHOTOSHOP FRAUD ! I SEE PAST YOUR FACADE
DROPP'N MORE PUSSY SHIT THAN THE BACKSIDE OF A BROAD
HOMIE, YOU ARE NOT A GOD-BUT TRUST YOU'LL GET PREY(PRAY)'D ON
YOUR FLOW'S WACK=GOTTA GET TIED TO THE TRACK TO STAY ON !!
N FUCK A MOD-WE ALL KNOW WHO'S REALLY RUNN'N THE SITE
NENO'S NOTHIN BUT HYPE-HE'S ONLY TUFF WHEN HE TYPES
CUS HE KNOWS HE SOFT ON THE MIC-BITCH FUCK YOUR TEXT
ONLY TIME YOU BLESS'D IS WHEN I PUT THE +cross+ To Your Chest
IT'S A LOSS OF RESPECT-MATTER FACT-WHAT'D YOU EXPECT ?
I'LL LEAVE DOLLA'S THROAT CUT THE WAY HE TALK OUT HIS NECK
ONLY A BUM WOULD ACCEPT DOLLA'S WORTH AS HARD CASH
HE FULLA SHIT-LIKE DOLLA GOT PULL'D OUT A STRIPPER'S ASS
THIS IS THE REAPER OF RAPS-BUT WHAT THE FUCK'S A "YANDYMAN" ?
CAN'T CONSTRUCT A TOUGHER BAR IF HE WAS A HANDYMAN
I CAN BARELY STAND YOU ACT'N LIKE YOU'RE "READY FOR WAR"
I'M DEADLY FOR SURE-YA'LL KNOW I'M HERE TO SETTLE THE SCORE
N YOU THINK YOU'RE A "PROBLEM"-YEAH I AGREE, YOU GOT ISSUES
BUT I GOT TIPS THAT WON'T MISS YOU-PISTOLS TO YOUR TISSUE
IT'S OFFICIAL-YANDY'S GOTTA STEAL LINES TO WRITE "FABOLOUS"
YOU AIN'T LO BUT KNOW YOU'RE NO "TOP NOTCH" STATUS
NO ADMIN CAN HANDLE THIS-YOU M.UTHA F.UCKAZ S.UCK
YA'LL AIN'T GOT THE BALLS TO BRAWL-IT'S LIKE YOU FUNNY FAGGOTS TUCK
JAY'S MAD AS FUCK-HE CAN'T STOP SOMEBODY CUS HIS TEXT BLOWS !
I'LL LEAVE HIS VERSE EXPOSED LIKE HIS VERSE EXPOS !
I'M AT YOUR NECK N THROAT-TAKE YOUR HYPHEN N YOU LEAVE YOU JAYD'D
BUT BELIEVE PROFESSOR'S TYPIN WORSE SHIT THAN JAY DID
KILLA'S GON TEACH THIS DUMB PROFESSOR A FUCK'N LESSON
BEAT EM WHEN THE BELL SOUNDS LIKE I'M ATTEND'N DETENTION
HE'S DEMAND'N ATTENTION-BUT NATION AIN'T GETT'N THRU
LEAVE PROFESSOR SUBDUE'D-NATION NEEDS A SUBSTITUTE !
N I AIN'T BEIN RUDE-BUT DAMN HOW DO YA'LL THINK YOU ILL
8 OF YA'LL GAINST 3 GON NEED THE WHOLE SITE TO TRY N KILL
YA'LL CAN GET YOUR FILL-I KNOW YA'LL HUNGRY FOR THE HATE
BUT REMEMBER -- GANGS KNOWN TO RAISE THE NATIONS MURDER RATE
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Re: Diss

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beat good lyrics good .....delivery....trash but i see much hope for you n audio
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the beat was pretty good
the lyrics are pretty dope
but ya flow an delivery needs sum tho
nice try keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: Diss

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r u from hhr?
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Re: Diss

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Thanks for the feedback....whats hhr ?
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Re: Diss

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fairly decent diss track overall, a couple a hard hitting one liners some typical emcee bashing cliches everynow and then but that can be easily over looked, the flow was too bad it could have been better in my opinion and your delievery needs some work too it's kinda like you don't sound too confident in yourself nevetheless asi mentioned before this was a decent diss track overall...keep elevating
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