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Multi Lyrical <feed this shit

Post by eMCee Havic »

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some quick shit have to go to a party..

ayo

disasterous verbally cancerous puffin cancer-sticks
fuck bein glamorous i damage-kids when i'm landin-hits
never a pacifist i'll bash-a-fist n grab the cash-an-split
im passionate 4 this rappin-shit dirty spittin contaminates
i communicate words to ruin-fates wit every move-i-make
chose-a-date n i'll bruise-ya-face just to prove-ya-ate
you fuel-tha-tanks n you'll lose-tha-race never to rejuvinate


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Post by ReCkinAll »

im feelin that..decent multi's

nice drop
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Post by --CUETE-- »

dug it. kinda too short to really get into it, nah mean. maybe at on to it, cus for what it is it's cool, can tell u free'd it cus theres no solid subject matter. but it's a good lil piece.
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Post by Darth Vader »

for what it is, real sick for something so short. when you have time you should probably expand on this or create something with the same type of flow and paint a picture you know?

i like the way you designed it to sound, tried it a couple of different ways but it sounds good to something Premier would create for sure with a slower riff. you have anything on audio?

keep puttin' em up homie.
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Post by insTRUmental »

yea, it was short, jus a lil quickie ..
you got talent wit tha multis tho..
your rhymes aint predicatable, you know how somtimes you cant read or listen to sombody flow and you already know what they gonna say before they say it? this was original and unique ..

i liked it ...

(now git on over to the battle ground and take that ass whoopin) lol

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Post by Phasewon »

decent shit, I've seen you come way harder, but like you said this was some quick shit, so in that sense, it was on point for the most part, shit would work as a lil freestyle type verse, multies was rockin', ok shit, stay droppin'.
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Post by Cee4 »

this was nice. the multis were on some Big Pun shit. nothing else i can really say but your proving to be quite a versatile writer

-- 19 Jun 2009 01:30 --

this was nice. the multis were on some Big Pun shit. nothing else i can really say but your proving to be quite a versatile writer
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