the come back

[~Symbolikull~]

People appointin me crazy, cuz Im the one whos joinin the navy,
I jus wanna stop those who oppose me and are destroyin ur babies,
N the youth to the future, if you cross me im lookin to shoot ya,
The truths Karma sutra, n most don’t have a clue to what suits ya,
Ur mental is weak, afraid to voice urself usin a pencil to speak,
Ur utensils a heat, a choice u make to help em stencil the streets,
In death and unknown, ur fears are false hopes best to me thrown,
Out use this test to Condone, ur thoughts, im always restin alone,
I ain blessin a soul, that’s fallin behind, death is what im callin rewind,
Lifes fast forward walkin a lie, tryin to speak properly talkin a rye,
But don’t qualify for equality for nuthin, lifes to raw to be to bluff it,
Actin unlawfully n cussin, I smash obstacles n raps a wall to me i crush it,
Its ironic how I subtract to add em, kills! When I explode like compacted atoms,
I bomb back to contact a phantom, a mercenary so heres my contract to fathom,
I signed in it blood, cuz truthfully ima criminal thinking witta a mind ofa thug,
Blowin up unnoticed like mines in the mud, no evidence never finding a slug,
Learn it theres no truce ina weapon, this is what the youth can use ina lesson,
they use n suppress em, abuse n arrest em, cuz we jus refuse to contest em,
never fightin for freedom, so god freed em? Nowadays dyin is breathin,
Contradictions wit no rhyme or a reason, hearts cold at anytime of the season,
Disease thats hungry so feed it, sick n wrong like a coat hanger punching a fetus,
Pure like Christians touchin on jesus, a captain, get it done in the clutch I get heated,
What I said I meant, take it how you wanna, jus know im open minded sentiments,
Witta intelligence, that’s irrelevant to the present so I present my precedence,
I give respect to the flow, check for the ghost unscene but I stay reppin it tho,
never mind how many records I sold, im gold in my own mind letting it show,
Im the illest of ill, spreadin lyrics within words unheard but I feel its so real,
A grim reaper ready to pillage n steal, ur mind, body, soul n village then kill,
All that stand in the way, u gotta crew I kill them too tell ur mans to behave,
Cuz im like the fan to the blade, 36 chop ya up in this land of the snake,
From Suburbs to the ghettos, it reaches all when anyone purges the metal,
Learnin to settle, instead of burnin the kettle, forever over turnin the vessel,
Sinkin in the ocean, is like your vast mind misbehaving n thinking wit emotion,
Drinkin in devotion, its like im the chain gang insane linkin the implosions,
Im in the elite of regimes, and yall jus kids in desperate need of a dream,
Movin fast like the feet of a fiend, Ive witnessed it all n everything in between,
The ups and the downs, left to the right to the wrong so whats wit the frown,
Ill pull ur chain n tug u around, ur gangsta? You ever been jumped til ur down,
Like blood in n blood out then crip walk it out, wanna fight cuz I don’t talk it out,
Make sure u know what loss’ about, show u the flip side of what bein a boss’ about,
Ur all faulty n owned, sayin ur falsely accused ridin my nuts so get off me, go home,
Salty cuz ur always controlled, in mind tryin to do me n usin all these multies to flow,
So u cry tears thru ur eyes, cuz u wanna be completed of ur fears n ur lies,
It’s the year of surprise, I live life here as it lies as could ur peers but they hide,
In a window of the pain, havin a hard time breathin like a pillow to the face,
Fuck it lifes simple to replace, hates the key to the gates theres no civil but haste,
N u wonder y im practicing stealth, cuz friendships harder than askin 4 help,
Better off to blast it urself, and im fuckin so hot the damn mattress may melt,
and to find my swagger, ill go inside ur soul wit this nine inch dagger,
outshine disaster, climb that ladder, faster this is the only time uve mattered,
After the pen gets sacrificed, to the paper we find that most ain even half as nice,
So I sacrificed my afterlife to be twice as nice as most not tryin to master a mic,
Rip wit cancerous rancid spit, my leverage of wreckage is worse than the average kid,
Hazardous, wit the randomness acts from the land of bliss I roam wit power like Vatican’s did,
My lifes sideways, twisted n purged, Lookin behind me cuz my vision is blurred,
Cant find my way, my wisdoms obscured, Ima change my life like a prisoners word,
My mother was always right should of listened to her, Im that animal lost alone, n missin the herd,
Or that drunk deciding 2 drive n hittin the curb, Heaven n hells in the final position to merge,
On to me, honestly ive had enuf ive witnessed the hurt, need to find myself, grow up wit a different courage,
Im fittin 2 surge, keep my fist tight grippin the urge, At beginning of birth, I was fucked livin on earth,
No mood to reflect, shitty attitude I expect, ridiculed a pitiful lyrical noob at my best,
We choose to respect, no clues to connect, I gotta boy at my right but whos at my left,
But yall ain gonna get away wit bullyin me, cuz im comin back harder than what u usually see,
One letter matters and im pullin the g, outta the alphabet cuz ima do me indubinantly,
Steady increasin my skill, gotta record enhanced to stay heavy as the king of the hill,
Sleepin to continue dreamin to kill, a heathin at will spits froze but breathin in chill,
Always keyin to keep my space at the bar, I get crunk jus to see ur face get ajared,
Makin my mark, takin ur heart, hated from start, famous to spark a flame in the dark,
Precede in credence, this world seems to believe in deceiving from what u read in the meetins,
Seen in the treasons n green is the reason our people are bleedin global warmin cheatin our seasons,
So thru this individuals lyrics i gained a criminals spirit so if it ain visible fear it,
Oh jus another political hearin, n im standin in the center getting ridiculed near it,
Sendin the facts, bendin the past n present protectin my rights I fend wit my hands,
Mendin my acts, amendin the pass for respect at face value never vent witta mask,
Sprayin heat thru words from a to z, so play wit me im dope and even the haters see,
Slay the beat but worse I aim to please, not! I came to be me the gsb wit no vacancy,
React wit my last aggressiveness, a genius evolving revolving past intelligence,
Most raps irrelevance, so I mask the negligence, keep it a secret & stash the evidence,
Hits persistent im not able to miss, ur a captain savin ur miss cuz im usin two pages to diss,
Rip ur shit from ur naval to ribs, cuz this blade’ll jus twist ur guts up ain it a bitch!!!,
Turnin the table, learn to be able cane & able spittin electrix burnin the cables,
Haters yurnin to hate u, seein my verse at a angle listens its like a sermon to angels,
A god send call me Gondi see yuh, left leakin puss when u speakin such shit like gonorrhea,
Flip the dough like mama mia, shit im the Caesar, drivin a hummer im here to bomb ya kia,
Visions are clearer, so here are my morals, u cant look at VI when u re-position the mirrors,
VI theirs no decisions to hear us, jus likely you wont fight me cuz ur missions to fear us,
so u kno that I’ll never be dead, wanna try me come fight me and I will sever ur head,
I write wit letters in red from letters that bled, like the rain in the weather ahead,
never mind im better instead, most for sure, moisten ur pants when u pose as pure,
If medicines it yall would overdose on cure, so clear ur mind of the wose that were,
Before u piss away ur life in disarray, cuz u missed ur day like sinners and religious pray,
Faith n death resume ina Contiguous way, if not they take ur moves like ur meniscus breaks,
to reveal the Masonic seal, in a monetary status keeping it as a patriotic feel,
Decode the nation defacing the kill, til peace ain a piece an its replacing the steel,
Its real I know it all like eagle eye, fine like needle point the points that ppl die,
U could equal mine, if u tried but u think wit only 50% of ur feeble minds,
Its sad that multis measure textin, but call me pac cuz this is my resurrection,
Fight me I use led projection, ina session u jus a paperweight needin fed protection,
Call it a win and cash the check, I ball to begin and smash the deck,
Its all n im in hints latch the vest, so fall wit the wind or catch the tek,

[eMCee Havic]

wow^^^^ thats amazingly long as fuck, good dump of the mind..
sweet.

[Omega Bill]

God damn, dude. Real talk: Instant Classic.

Best read on here in a long time.

[complexity]

The friendship line was cool.

I liked the rome wordplay.

The face value metaphor was nice.

Stencil the streets line was dope. The whole first part was really on some next level shit, in my opinion. Besides a few lyrical mishaps that shouldn't even be touched on by me because the consistency was there.

I was really feeling the flow for the drop at first then the flow weakened a bit and the substance picked up, that pattern continued for the rest of the time.

You could have made a few bars more efficient by losing a few rhymes.

"React wit my last aggressiveness, a genius evolving revolving past intelligence,"

Probably could have sharpened up a couple of them bars. I'm sure when you read the entire piece over at the end, you noticed a couple spots like that, they could have been more lucid.

I don't think that I'm going to give this a rating. The greatest strength of the piece was the amount of knowledge that you tackled. The biggest weakness was letting the audience connect with what you were saying for the whole time, so even if they didn't understand it, they would able to have an impression. I think some people will question your motivations for certain lines because you were a bit obscure & ambiguous. I want to be clear that I thought you were decisive in a lot of your judgements like on global warming. I just thought that sometimes the crutch of the rhyme interfered with the overall point.

"No mood to reflect, shitty attitude I expect, ridiculed a pitiful lyrical noob at my best,"

I thought this was a kind of weak line after the much less subtle line about being fucked since your birth.

How dope was this drop? Alpha Bill messaged me on aim, hurry up and check this out. Word.

Eventually, this drop will make it old school classics when we finally get that section organized, i.e. take out all my bullshit drops and put in shit like this.

(Add some of your signature into your biography please and shorten that shit a bit)

[GrimBlaze]

wow that was real sick.........

vocab was off the chain, flow was on point, technicslly this was some ill shit. content wise it was cool, bit of filler here and there but that aint even worth goin on about cos overall this was one of the best pieces i seen on here.
definitely wanna see more bro.1.

[~Symbolikull~]

thanx for all the feed i will get back to feedin on everyones shit eventually jus tryin to get back in the flow of things round here for a bit... catch up on whos who an all that good shit.lol

one

[Ambiguous Realm]

i didn't even check to see how long it was until i realized my eyes were about to pop out of my skull and i still couldn't see the end lol, overall i'd say one of ur best if not ur best, rhymescheme was hot, couple spots it fell but picked up almost unnoticably, topics were koo, the first half seemed like a quick sign of improvement since last time u were around, definitely nice to see u back again

[~Symbolikull~]

thanx dude lookin forward to runnin the forum again

[-TraMaTiK-]

After the pen gets sacrificed, to the paper we find that most ain even half as nice,
So I sacrificed my afterlife to be twice as nice as most not tryin to master a mic,
Rip wit cancerous rancid spit, my leverage of wreckage is worse than the average kid,
Hazardous, wit the randomness acts from the land of bliss I roam wit power like Vatican’s did,
My lifes sideways, twisted n purged, Lookin behind me cuz my vision is blurred,
Cant find my way, my wisdoms obscured, Ima change my life like a prisoners word,
My mother was always right should of listened to her, Im that animal lost alone, n missin the herd,
Or that drunk deciding 2 drive n hittin the curb, Heaven n hells in the final position to merge,
On to me, honestly ive had enuf ive witnessed the hurt, need to find myself, grow up wit a different courage,
Im fittin 2 surge, keep my fist tight grippin the urge, At beginning of birth, I was fucked livin on earth,
No mood to reflect, shitty attitude I expect, ridiculed a pitiful lyrical noob at my best,
We choose to respect, no clues to connect, I gotta boy at my right but whos at my left,


that stood out the most^,plain sick son. glad to see u around again, flow was krazy man. u shud do more audio when u getta chance an record this itd be sick as fuck. no complaints on this. keep droppin!

[Haz]

Good Shit..
Piece Was Long..
Multi's Were PRetty Much On Point
Substance Was Cool,
Could See Where U Were Coming From..
Could Of Made It a Bit More Exciting When It Got Passed The Middle Just To Keep Me Caught Up In Reading It..

Anyway's Welcome Back. Keep Droppin Shit Like This